I love how this story turned out. It's nice to see a story that explores Jasper and Bella's relationship a little. I think there's a lot more to Jasper that hasn't been revealed. I'm looking forward to learning more of his story in Eclipse. Until then, I'll satisfy myself by reading great stories like yours. I look forward to reading the next great creation to come out of your brain. :)

I really enjoyed this. It is very well-written and I think you did an excellent job keeping both Jasper and Bella in character. The end was a nice touch )

I love your story. There are so little Jasper/ Bella friendship stories. I hope to see more stories from you in the future!

Hey Jasper4ever!

This was truely an amazing story. It gave such great insight into Japser's persona. I think you did a fantastic job on the dynamic between Jasper and Bella too. Bravo! Great Job.

-Storms (Ambereyes)