This is a cute story plz make more and keep up the great work!

Goddess Kes, where have you /gone?/
Your fandoms miss you! And await your return!

Please, this is a beautiful little story that begs to be continued. so, please?

A promising start; nicely written, but not too much too fast. Appreciate that. Please continue! =)

Amazing! Please keep up the great writing. n_n

I enjoyed this a lot! You have a knack for staying in character. Fakir is so selfish! *giggles*

A good start. The style is clear and characters sound right.

*fangirlish SQUEAL* xD

I raburaburabu jyuu!
&& your writing style is great. So great.
Nice thought on the sword. Is "Toriolees" its name? (I think I'm wrong)

Yay! FakirxAhiru interaction was incredibly cute! x3

"I might as well picke the Ahiru I like best."
Can't help but go aww there.
*wonder when they'll confess*

Awesome! You are faved and alerted.
Update soon!
You rawk faces.

Bai~! xD

~ x.j.

Hmm...'tis interesting.

I luv how Fakir is so blunt. xD Usually in some stories, he rarely shows humor (if he does, you'd have to squint to see) and he's always angsting so I really like how you portrayed him.
And o0o0o0o, kewl sword.

*reading next chapter now*

Awesome job! ^^

~ x.j.

I think this story has a lot of promise. I would like to see it continue. The chapters could stand to be a little longer, maybe with a little more detail. But I really liked where you are going with this.

oo! this a good!

Hi!

Oh! How sweet.

But... What will be the true reason Fakir turn back the girl Ahiru??

Keep writing!!

:O!! Fakir! what have you done?!?
so, was it a heart shard of Fakir's that gave Ahiru her human form again?
The Tutu shard from the series was Mytho's desire to have his heart completed, so, is this blue shard Fakir's love for Ahiru? but won't it have a detrimental effect on their relationship if he separates that particular shard from himself?

...!! i certainly hope they get their 'happily ever after'!!

oh! you have me a-flutter with curiosity!

Toriolees

Love the story, update soon, wanna see where you're going with it.
Nini

e! yay!
Welcome, Kes, to the Princess Tutu!!
oh, i can tell this is going to be good!!

(one small note: i believe Mytho's sword returned and repaired itself at the climax of the story, allowing for the prince to defeat the Raven, and i think it returned with him into the story too.)

Thank you for contributing!! this fandom needs all the love it can get!!

Toriolees

Hi!!

Intresting story, what would happen next?

What's Ahiru happy ending?

Why does Fakir need that favor??

Update soon!!

Don't let this be a tragedy!!