That was wrong but incredibly funny

Liked your story "Shooting Straight" but I have to disagree about Ron/Bonnie never getting together...I have read quite a few good stories about the two hooking up. I guess you meant that YOU would never write a story like that.

oh, i dont know about it "never" happening... check out Blackbird's "the pathetic tale of bonnie rockwaller" and then get back to me.

LOL. I like RonBon too...and K/R...and Rongo...loved the story...poor Bonnie, tho (did I REALLY just think that?)

Shortly after this incident, Ron received an offer he couldn't refuse. He and Kim now live in Anchorage where he earns a seven figure income selling refrigerators. :)

Loved it!

great one, i enjoyed it much.

aw man.

that was a twist. but makes sense. could a went with the three way.

but dude. anything you make is like pure gold.

but is there one where ron gots all the girls "sexual" attention [kim, shego, bon, tara, mon, yori, and maybe an O.C.]? if not then you are the person to create that masterpiece.

“Admit it, Bonnie. You get wet--with perspiration, standing this close to me.”

Oh my. You… you are just cruel. It may have something to do with the fact that this is the second story to deny me today, but as soon as it cut to the restaurant I was literally screaming at someone – anyone - to give me back uncomfortable conversations, sexy!Ron, and the drama I so need. But I digress, for despite my frustration, the fact that it could create a situation where I WAS this desperate is a feat in and of itself.

The setup was standard enough, but it allowed something to happen, creating an escalation that could only end one of two ways, both of which have their merits. It continued and continued, merely gaining more steam and speed as Ron spills what I’m sure all of us wished to say at one point of another, then, finally it gets to what we came here for, and one can only bite their nails and watch as it unfolds.
Then we are turned upside down. NEVER have I seen a oneshot with such a perfect – and well placed – twist, creating fun from lust and love from longing, the readers themselves left flapping in the wind. The ending was expected, but it was an appropriate send off to a ridiculous tale masquerading as one of intensity.

I agree with what’s-his-face that this deserves a sequel, or at least a new chapter, but I wouldn’t presume to tell you how to do your job, mostly because you’d inevitably find a way to torture us even more. Also, your chrome notes simply pwn. And by that I mean you own them.

In completely other news:
“Out on a mission… another Doomsday Device…” He answered absent-mindedly.
One of the better things about the show is that, despite retaining a cool head and a high success rate when the entire world and the freedom of humanity are at stake, Kim struggles with “common” problems such as family, friendship and romance. Kind of reminds me of Superman punching a meteor in half then returning to Earth and becoming tongue-tied in front of Lois.

OW! Got a damn hernia thanks to YOU! ;)

MK2

Excellent story!
Ron pointed out everything that a Ron/Bon fan would use as ammo to say why Bonnie liked Ron! I loved the reaction that Bonnie had, and in front of the other cheerleaders no less! Pure Gold! I'm actually shocked that Bonnie didn't just grab Ron right there and give him a kiss rivaling Kim under Moodulator control! Now, that would have been something for the cheerleaders to talk about.
As for the address at the end, once I read that it was Kim's idea I had a sneaking suspicion as to where Bonnie would end up and the scream at the end had me falling out of my seat, clutching at my sides in laughter! The only part I wish you'd done was describe how Bonnie dressed up for her meeting with Ron. That would have made the impact of meeting Larry all the better, lol!
Keep up the great work!

This was a very amusing story. I agree with Brother Bludgeon. This is it for Bonnie. She has nothing left. The only way she could possibly come back is if she went out with Larry and enjoyed herself.

Could Larry improve himself with a little work? Anything's possible for a Possible, after all.

CMY, esteemed colour commentator of Fanfiction, at the most recent match promoted by S-Chrome. Here's some footage of the ending of the match.

Start rolling :

...(like he's being choked)OH MY GAWD!...that...that-was-BRUTAL!THAT WAS BER-RU-TLE!No one can get up from that!

There's the pin. One,two,it's over,get the coffin. Did you see that last move!? That was just SICK...it should be banned, it really should. You could kill someone with that. Is she still alive? Someone stop the footage, her family may be watching. Oh wait,never mind, they wouldn't care...

End Footage.

S-Chrome, you are the most evil, the most sick, the most twisted writer I have ever met. To have Bonnie be set up with...with...HIM...you will have to answer to the Guy Up There when your Final Judgement comes. May he have mercy on your soul. No one, not even Bonnie, deserves that.

P.S. This is quite a possiblity. Perhaps the ultimate reason for her jealousy is the biggest Jell of them all...Kim having something that she always wanted but never have; a friend and eventual BF...join the club, Bonnie. Man, Kim is SO lucky...

Made me laugh

Well, of course Ron/Bon will never happen. Nor should it. It's a preposterous pairing. Bonnie/Larry on the other hand is ripe with potential.

While the prank seemed OOC for both Ron and Kim in terms of its cruelty, it was still nice to see Ron enjoy a little payback at Bon-Bon's expense after all the mean things she's said and done to him over the years.

And, as long as we're on the topic of OOC -- not one shot at the Sox? Who has abducted our S-Chrome and replaced him with this impostor?

LOL, now that's cold. Larry has his dream girl for one micro second, then two shattered eardrums. Got to be some major trauma in that. And if you believe for one minute that Bon-Bon will let this go unavenged, I have some very nice ocean side property in Arizona you can buy for a small song.
Thanks
Spectre