great addition! omg i cant tell which one is hotter ahaha wow that must have been insanely intense for him to trance lol she should feel honored! i love your ff9 fanfics maybe one day i'll read the rest =P amazing story again ^^ i really wish i could write like you :D

I love your lemons, they really do paint a picture.

o.O Did he go into trance? Whew, that was freakin' hot!

Mystic

Damn. Great story. You need to write more. These are really good.

that was cool.towards the end was very emotional, i could just imagine Zidane smiling down at Dagger in the way that he does. Aww, you should wirte a story with Dagger finding out she's pregnant, that'd be cool!

I loved it!

I think we can overlook the not-human thing on the count of MINDBLOWING SEX! *gives thumbs up*