so your reading po3 huh?? its gonna b good, just saying that ha ha. the usual, awesome story, and of course loving it so much!!

aw forbidden love, how cute. love it so much, i hope shypaw is okay, althugh i don't think she'll get away without injuries ha ha ha ha ha

aw the ending was adorable. silly silly flyingpaw, ha ha. he's funny with a side of desperate. awesome job, of course

awesome, since it's to late for me to suggest romances, i hope the apprentices find love at least ha ha. awesome job, as usual

Awesome!! Not surprised though, you make awesome stories all the time!! Love your work, your on my favorite authors list ha ha. Great chapter.

no awesome but scary in some way, the clans cant get rid off *cry cry cry cry*

I want Shadowpaw to live

I like Rockpaw and Shadowpaw more than I like Rockpaw and Shalepaw

I like Brownpaw x Leafpaw and i also like Nightpaw x Hunterpaw

I like Nightpaw x Flyingpaw They're so cute together.

Make Shadowpaw fall in love with a tomcat from another clan please thanx

Like i said i like the idea of Nightheat for Nightpaw and Shadowfang for Shadowpaw

Now There's an awesome Warriors Name-calling..."dirty mouthed, maggot eating piece of crowfood," Much better than Dumbbutt, Doncha think?

lol, I LOVE Shadowpaw...I would swear that Cat is Part Vulcan!! (a humanoid[ish] alien breed from the TV Show Star Trek that are unable to feel emotions) I'm Part Trekkie so I just HAD to say that...:-)

Once again...Sorry to be picky and I know this is an ancient book that you wrote two years ago but, but please note for future nooks...Cats don't use common modern-day Namecalling techniques...Neither do ther swear normally...ie: Instead of saying Dumbbutt or Retard, they would probably say "Mousebrain," or "Foxdung," or even "Badgerspit," (Although I've never heard a cat actually say that.) Or Instead of saying "Crap!" or "What the heck are you doing?" They might say "Great Starclan!" or What in the name of Starclan are you doing?" All there Swears and Oaths are based on Starclan, their family, or Their Clan.
I love your style of writing, Your discriptions are Vivid and your characters imaginative, however, You incorporate to much modern language, you seem to forget that they are speaking "Cat." Think on this and Thank you so much for writing these Awesome stories!