Love it! Christian and Jennifer are my favorite characters in the movie!

Jennifer just needs to...die...multiple times...

Eh, I'm not really crazy about it at all. The whole quoting the movie lines exactly was a little cliche and annoying. I know what happens. It wasn't really in Jen's POV, either. And she was way too played off. She was made seemingly like a peppy, "come on baby just once" kind of girl. But I will never have anything against Christian aka Mike Vogel. Hottie!

This is a wonderfully written story! I'd love for you to continure it.