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| DPFan13 2007-06-25 ch 4,  | abuseaw! |
| vreales 2007-05-27 ch 3, | abuseah! no moliver! i am gonna stop reading now. |
| vreales 2007-05-27 ch 1, | abuseso far, so good. |
| Mystical-Dreamer57 2007-04-30 ch 4, | abuseOh wow. that was totally unexpected. I can't believe. that happend. I liked it though. Please continue making more fanfics. |
| x14xERIKAx14x 2007-04-21 ch 4, | abusehah, lovely chapter. update soon :] |
| Hannah Montana 1996 2007-04-21 ch 4, | abuseUm... Kinda short but good idea! If it was longer I would have LOVED it! |
| Lily Pad Rose 2007-04-18 ch 4, | abuseThis was short, but it was good! But still, too short. But still good, makey longer! Ok, still short. |
| x14xERIKAx14x 2007-04-17 ch 3, | abusehaha, soo short, but that's kk. update?? |
| iheartdisney128 2007-04-17 ch 3, | abuseupdate soon! :D |
| xblackenedrosex 2007-04-17 ch 1, | abuseI've seen this idea tons of times, even done as a Moliver a few times, so I didn't think it was very original. I thought that this chapter was kind of pointless, and it was way too brief. You didn't give any background about the characters, their personalities, or even their thoughts. There was no detail, and no dialogue, one of the two most important parts of a story. The note was kind of stupid, considering Miley isn't stupid, she knows who she would hang out with in every class, so she would immediately guess that is was Oliver. If you're doing a story with a secret admirer, you should have a chapter or two before the character recieves the note, that way it builds up to it. Just so you know, this was not meant to be a flame, but it was to helpy ou improve your writing. Better luck next time! -xbrx |
| x14xERIKAx14x 2007-04-16 ch 2, | abusehm short, but totally AWESOME!! update asap, plz?? review ya later :D |
| Ferdinand Duke Musking 2007-04-16 ch 2, | abusePersonally I really think this is some serious **. Please think over your potential as a writer. Love ya babes, Ryan P.S. Get a new idea |
| Lily Pad Rose 2007-04-16 ch 2, | abuseYay! Can you make the chapters longer when you don't have writers block please! Or no pet monkey for you! Updatey! |
| iheartdisney128 2007-04-16 ch 2, | abuseUpdate Soon! :D |