Er. I liked the first 2 chapters. I didn't particularly enjoy the last 3, because... I guess Light and L seemed out of character. I don't think L would fall in love that quickly. I don't think Light had an adequate explanation, and neither did the reader, for why Light needed/loved L. Don't kill me, but I feel that although your writing style is good, the characterizations deviated a little too far for comfort.

im guessing you've seen the live action death note moveis from the dani calafornia thing, if you haven't you should,so if you didn't know L change the world comes out on the 18th or 25th of august i want to see it so badly

This is one of the best stories i have ever read! Hope you write more stories in the future!!

It was so sweet I think it very nearly gave me diabetes :/
Short but touching.
I loved it.

oh... my... god...
you writing is beyond remarkable
I don't know where you can come up with such creative things
and it ended perfectly!
giving me some kind of hope that in some alter universe, light and L do get to be together is amazing!

i so feel for the tennis match .. but then i was like ow how dumb of me. keep up the great work i love your writing style.

That was amazing! I think you are the best writer I have come across yet! I am amazed at how much thought must have been placed into writing this and obviously how much research. I am apreciative.

Ja ne!

~Sesshy T.

I really ought to be writing a long, long review to thank you for the amount of enjoyment 'Strawberry Heartbreak' has given me, but I'm far too hungry and sleepy to. I loved it! I would implore you to write an epilogue or a continuation of it, if I didn't know that a good many pieces of fiction happen to derive their good taste from the same hunger pang / withdrawal -inducing endings I am suffering of right now. Though I would really like it if you did..
Anyway, thanks a lot! And please know that despite my little tit-bit about taste, I would be quite happy //as in Lawliett-cake-happy happy// if I did see a story in similar settings. Scratch that, I'd kill for it.XD

omgosh wat an awesome story! they get together yay!
thank you

awesome story, really cute. i loved it!

as for that tennis match, i knew what i hoped it would be. lol

just thought id make ure reviews up to 100! Loved this!

El sounds like a Spanish name sorta XD Loved the ending and the whole thing. It was brill-i-ant! =)

It's been a long time since i read fanfiction, and it's even a longer time that a fic truly touched my heart and made me smile1

Thank you!

i don't get the ending...so did they get together or what...?

That was sweet. I cried so hard when L died, and I have to say this made me feel a little better about it. Strangely, my favorite part was the tragic dessert.
Heh.