Excellent story, even with slashy themes (not a fan). Thanks for writing it and goodluck with next chapter =))

WOW! That was totally awesome!! Definitely a 2x ultimate favorite! I can't wait to find out what happens next! I love the Viper flight stuff! Is that your design? Because I don't remember ever hearing about any X-304's on Stargate. There are several episodes of Atlantis that I'm waiting to see what you do differently. I'm REALLY ANXIOUS for the next chapter!!

I really like this story, it's the only one of its kind.

I am happy to see that you have been updating. It has been a while since I read this last. I am looking forward to reading more.

believe it or not Stealth was the first thing that popped into my mind! great story!

I love that you named her Jessica Fletcher. Like Jessica Fletcher the woman who attracts murder no matter where she goes... How many people have got the reference?

Um.. in the fourth paragraph of the section "Four days later; Over Atlantis" the person welcoming them back to atlantis is grodin... but unless there's two of them peter grodin died on the satellite in the last chapter. Plus in the 7th paragraph of "an hour later" harry says “Peter, make sure that’s saved somewhere.” There's also several places throughout the story, mostly when you mention sheppards team in a meeting together where you meant teyla but wrote taylor.

Good job though. looking forward to more.

Oh my, hm, the story rocks, seriously, it is fantastic :))

Awesome story, interesting how you put alot of details in creating Harry's powers.

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Wonderful novel. The characters are brilliant. I love how you incorporated the episodes into your world.

I only have one negative in a sea of positives; you tend to be repetitive in word choices within sentences/paragraphs. Eg. "Their viewers automatically adjusted to give them a better view..." instead of 'view' you could use 'visibility'.

I adore your novel and I hope that you continue to play with the world you created.

what was harry doing?
possible H/J/?R?

Between Harry's issues, and military policy, it seems impossible that there could evr be a Harry and John. They're surviving in another galaxy! They should be allowed to take achance with each other.

I hope Harry takes imaginary John's advice so that he might have a chance with real John.

Harry may have been away from the Wizarding world for over ten years, but it is obvious that the damage that they did to him is STILL lingering. Almost everyone that Harry ever trusted turned on him, and blamed him when things when wrong in their lives. All he ever did was give of himself, and it was never good enough. It shows when Harry tries to interact with Elizabeth and John. It's like he WANTS to be friends with them, but he doesn't know how to open himself to them.