YOU GOTTA HAVE MOR CHAPTERS! This struck a chord.

“Max.” He whispered. “Can I keep you?”

“Of course you can.” Max whispered back before falling into a deep sleep.

by far my favorite line - please continue

Interesting

cute fic! love the plot! keep updating! _ :)

i am lovin your story. keep it up _

Love this fic! Not a lot of Terry/Max fics out there. Hope to read more soon!

Eeeeeee! Nice story! I have a major bias for Terry/Max, and I mean major _! Demo...Terry should not quit being Batman (

Finish it! FINISH IIIT!

Ooohhh, this is good! I think this will be a good story, but don't make him stop being Batman! Max should not let him. Keep up the good work!

Here's the deal; it's really cool, and well written (minus a few spelling or gramatical errors.) I think the story in itself is common, but the consept is always different; I would suggest continuing it with other episodes in order to make it your own.

I just recently started watching Batman Beyond with my boyfriend, and it's really awsome. Thank you for giving me hope for future episodes.

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Quit bein Batman? Ahhh...lol, I'm kidding. That was very sweet! :) Wonderful writing...you have talent! I know there's a chapter two or sequel or something, right? Hurry, hurry! :)

Well done! Good conflict, action and romance. These two rock together. I'm surprised there are so many Terry/Max fans. But please don't make Terry quit being Batman!

Yay this rocks :)

Hurry! Write another one! Pleae!

Maraveloso. True to the characters. Love Max/terry pairing. Continue sooooon