Can't wait :)))

Please use a dictionary

I like the story, thank you for writing it.

please continue

Hello Sheep-san

(or should that be hitsuji-san?)

is a great story!

Continue please!

Toodles and Love

Oky Verlo

GRAH! This stupid computer won't log me in, and I can't Favourite this story... *sobs* But I like it! It's very good! The only thing that made it REALLY hard to read was the fact that you kept switching back and forth between tenses, such as: "I'm fine." Tohru said but her face were showing worry and she's frowning. (Not the exact sentence, but oh well. :P )

But, still... very good! I hope you write more! :D

I LOVE the story! it has a nice twist 2 it and i like the way akito is shown as an extremely horrible person. (by the way, akito's father is dead and his mother hates him. also his mother's name is rin.(not izuzu, just rin)nyway PLEASE WRITE MORE!

I can't imagine Tohru being so wild and stern, it was a shock, but I really like it! o well almost evrything except the part when Kito is now Tohru's fiancé I prefer Akito being Tohru's husband hehehe

WOW! that was really good! is there going to be another one?

I dont quite get this chapter but i still look forward to the next one... Tohru is too cold and evil, so it doesn't really sound like she should.

are kito and tohru get together or something sheep-san?

that would be cool but tohru could also get together with kyo(yes i know i am a tradionalist)

toodles and love

Oky Verlo

wow- i like it! i wuz wondering, r all the other zodiac going to be introduced? good story- kudoes for u!write more!XD

oh

poor matt

the story is very good but you are evil to matt!

Matt is a little kid don't make him be abandoned!

toodles,

Oky Verlo.

WONDERFUL!

Update soon or I'll kill myself.

Good kitty Kat Jazz- Sod sod sod! I can't belive that that monster( brakes into sods.) The love between them is so amazing(starts to sod AGAIN!)

Evil Kitty Kat Jazz-(kicks good one out of chire) That * I hope he burns in *!

I can't stand him in the show can't stand him in the fan fic She's to good for him! And her poor little brother!

Good Kitty Kat Jazz-( throughs pocky, evil one runs after it like a little kid...) That That ma.. No that monster is unbelivibal! I don't don't don't like him at all!

Evil Kitty Kat Jazz- ( kicks good one out of the chair with pocky in mouth.) Ohh and you suck at spelling! So to sume thyis review up the so called "king" sould burn in the deepest part of *! So...

Good Kitty Kat Jazz and Evil Kitty Kat Jazz- BYB and write more!