Hi Charro,

Bravo! You did an Outstanding job in describing Jarod's lonely life. Beautifully written. Looking forward to your next piece.

Mercy

Hey Charro -

What a great little one shot, it conveys a very realistic portrayal of what I do believe Jarod would feel, especially after so many years on the run. So again, great little piece. THanks for sharing :D

- KQ

Bravo, Charro. I love the way you described Jarod's unhappy life, and also of his hopes and dreams of having a family with the whole white picket fence bit.

Beautifully written!

Even pretenders like Jarod can't keep pretending they are cheery all the time, reality does catch up on their escape, escape of a normal life as well. I think you illustrated this with a brutal charm. The tv eps were perhaps longer, but they usually didn't linger this much at emotional issues.