ok i've decided to put down a blanket review for all your stories so i don't look stupid. THEY ARE BRILLIANT! I love them and all that jazz and if i find a really really good one i will leave and extra special review :)

Those two can be so cute somethings. I wonder what exactly their past was that was hinted in the game. -

Short, but very good! You should make a story out of this, seriously! This could be really good!

Well, write more :)

Just read your other story so I thought I'd comment on this one too. :) I really like your writing style and this a shot, cute, and sweet. Your descriptions are good, I love the butterfly similie. Very nice