this is so sad! it's really good, but i almost cried. probably because im an alanna/jon fan.

Aw... Cute. Foolish of her to marry him in the first place. Good thing she didn't. This is EXACTLY what would have happened. Except she may not have escaped.

Love it... honestly it's amazing... I was going through old fics to see if there was something that would catch my attention, and I don't know what I expected when I started this, but it totally surpassed any expectations I had for any fics I thought I'd find. The way you built up to it and everything... very awesome!

thats cute
good way of writing it

OMG this was so cute! im happy she didnt end up with Jon... I didnt like them together, but that lovoe triangle was uber(very in my terms) cute!
great story :)

aww - poor Alanna - poor Jon too - this just shows that she picked the right man!

Wow.

First of all, characters are amazing. You have captures all of them (george, alanna, jon) so wonderfully well, and so beautifully.

Second: Situation is so completely believable. As in this is probably exactly what would have happened if she'd married jon. amazingly well written.

loved it. it was quite sad but the ending was great. i have to admit though i thought she was going to kill Jon with the dagger. lol. you should continue this.

This was sad, but it was really good, I feel bad for Jon, but I loved the ending, she wasn't happy with him.

When I read the part where it said 'she didn't love him' I could fell the anger rise in my vaines, I didn't read the whole story cuze I know I won't like it.
hey guess what you shoudn't write AJ if it's not an AJ story,
AJ 4eva
Elisa M.

wow, talk about a risky relationship. great write!!
starlockxx

well, almost all of us are glad that Alanna never married Jon, and now we see why... Great writing!

OMG I WANT TO CRY! I absolutely love George and this is an amazing fic. Amazing!

Wow, that was really good. I'm not sure, but you might have switched tense somewhere in the story, but the whole thing was really good, realistic. She loved Jon, but not the role she had to fit into to be his wife. Very well written, It would be a neat story to continue if ou want to.
~Echo

EEP! what happens?! hurry and update! i loved it!