Great story :-) just expecting to see some sky/jack pairing and less jack/Z pairing

Great story :-) I was just expectng

cool

you have to finish this story it is very good please keep going.

I REALLY LIKE THIS STORY! please keep going.

Seriously fucking awsome, Cant wait for the new series, get it posted soon!

ALRITE, Welcome back, Blanks! Very good Chapter,can't wait for more.

It's too damn bad that this isn't going to be continued. It was really picking up the pace and I would have loved to see what you would have done with Shadow Ranger.

And from what I could piece together, the traitor was Birdie. Can't wait for any other stories you'll write!

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I'm looking forward to the next Chapter; things look great so far. I like the image you've painted here; I always thought of remaking S.P.D. with Jasmine's powers only, but you've done great with this vision of yours. If you don't mind, I'd like to talk to you about a vision I have for the fiction I am working on; from what I've read, you seem to have a similar view in your fiction.

Good story, but it's really awful for z to lead jack on by sleeping with him. good story though... simply waiting for more.

If you're gonna play around w/ the pairings, can we see a little Jack/Syd?

WOO RAH! That is the best chapter you have done so far. I think you should have let jack cheat a bit in the fight, but not my place to judge. The thing with Z and Sky, where I'm from once something like that it said things never go back to normal and when a third party is invalid it becomes worse. But I like yo style never the less Hope you update soon.

Por favor a mi me gustaría más que hubiera un final Sky/Z ,, Syd/Jack.

I love it... So dramatic...

Man, I could taste this chapter. That's how real it was. It was most definitely the most intense one you've written here. From Mora and Sam (simply excellent portrayal, btw) to Bridge with the Hydrax thing to Sky in District M and then later of course the huge blowout in the CC and Jack and Z rockin' the casbah.

And this cloak and dagger stuff with the traitor is killing me. I'm worried now; I also am pretty sure that a couple of people are definitely not the traitor, but there are a whole cast-full of people who could be. I've not often been this excited about a fanfic; you're keeping me riveted here. Thanks.