Beautiful... simply beautiful. I am speechless. *favs the story*

Aw... it's bbeautiful... very well done. I could even feel my stomach tighten as you described their kiss, their longing... all in all, very well done... you'd feel you were one of the characters.

Lovely follow-up to your previous piece.

that was awesome! so full of emotion passion and so much romance and love kyah makes me warm inside

One word: favorites.

wow i love it. ^_^

Aw so sweet... and so well written... ** love both... but this one made me aw al the time

That was so cute. I love NejiHina, they are so perfect together.

oh! this was lovely! ^.^ i adored it, thanks for sharing

omg ur writing is just so perfect!! and my favorite pairing is nejihina! please write more soon. I'll appreciate it if you continue this crack open the sky :)

Wow! I can hear that thunder in my head now :) Great! I loved every word of it and every emotion it carried. More NejiXHina please!

Ehmm... Succulent... Sinful... Satisfying... What can I say... there's nothing I can say. There's no improving on perfection and this is without a doubt a masterpiece. 10/10

Love it very much.