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| Kuro666 2008-03-02 ch 1,  | abuseWow! This one was genius, I really have to bow to you :) I really liked this view of them, something different, something from the inside. It was good >w< I dont know what to say but Tezuka seemed clueless XD that would be my word to describe him after reading your fic! "Clueless" thats wha describes tezu best XDD Awsome story~~ Kuro |
| syNemYoA 2008-03-02 ch 1, | abuseaww,.,. i love this! ;) at least it wasnt ALL about tennis,.,. hahaha great story! :) is there a sequel? :D i could only hope there is,.,. ;D so,.,. what exactly is the word? :) (my guess,.,. DENSE!) ;) |
| Unheard Symphony 2008-02-05 ch 1, | abuseGreat job! It was...hm..let me find the word...Refreshing =) Indeed this story has a refreshing feature from other fanfics. Yay Tezuka Zone!! |
| fuga 2008-01-05 ch 1, | abuseAmazing. I'm spellbound. |
| greenteamoose 2007-11-25 ch 1, | abuseEnding = a greatly amusing surprise XD. It took me a moment to realize that the word is the title. I love your writing! It has little hints of humor yet is not crack at all (e.g., mentions of Tezuka's fangirls, ordering the team to run 50 laps, etc.) *glows with admiration!* Ever gotten any inspiration to continue your captain series-of-sorts? :D Though you've already covered my favorite ones... |
| blackorchid143 2007-11-23 ch 1, | abuseOh...That explain the title xD Cute one xD |
| fujilovesme 2007-11-21 ch 1, | abuseheh is the word oblivious? That would describe him well... |
| SilverySnow 2007-10-27 ch 1, | abuseVery insightful. Your characterization on Tezuka's part was wonderfully done. I'm very impressed. But why didn't you say what the word was? Anyway, I'm guessing the word was "cluesless" am I right? or are you leaving it as a writer's interpretaion? |
| The Orange Girl 2007-10-07 ch 1, | abuse... I wish I was your OC! XD She was very lovable. Raburi, raburi. Tezuka-buchou was more lovable because all throughout the fic, he was very in character, and not being totally smitten with her just made it much, much sweeter. Definitely a very amazing piece of work. *goes off singing 'Love so Sweet'* ~Orange ^0^ |
| Garowyn 2007-09-24 ch 1, | abuseExcellent work. |
| mysticLegend11 2007-08-22 ch 1, | abuseYou just gave me an idea. Thanks. Haha, the title, eh? True. Quite true. However, I still think it's a better idea to write it down at the bottom for those who are still clueless. Why is it that you never give your OCs names? -.- I love your writing style. I don't know why, but I love it. I never love anyone's writing style, but I've fallen head-over-heels in love with yours. |
| juz-a-reviewer 2007-08-16 ch 1, | abuseit was great...very very well done...i loved it! |
| Miharuru 2007-08-06 ch 1, | abuseThat was lovely. Because Tezuka is just like Tezuka and not like an OOC who actually pays attention to girls and falls in love with them. It's awesome you still managed to put some sweet |
| chowmein 2007-07-23 ch 1, | abuseI love this. Not only just a view from an outsider, but the girl's team too. I think that the girls who were truly serious about tennis might resent the boys team in some ways. I'm glad to see that, and your oc seems quite likable. Good job! |
| Tressa 2007-06-18 ch 1, | abuseVery nice! Its great to see the beloved captain from on outsiders POV. Its also a great reminder that he is a good student and has an intereste outside of tennis as well. I loved the pacing of this story and the description from the girl's tennis club. Its great to be reminded that there is a girls tennis club, quite frankly. And I loved Tezuka's response at the end. Great job! |