laughed myself to death

very funny you have comic talent

'she settled for stomping her foot and mentally counting to ten.'

Lol I personally found this very funny and strangely i could really picture it. hehe the race was a good idea. If you do more i'd certainly read XD

"IT'S TIME TO DUEL!"

I'm pretty sure I died a little when i read that. I love the Narnia books and this was so wonderful. Except for a couple typos it was great.

You're wonderful

Kirux

Well, any humourfic about this sort of thing must necessarily BE ooc, so that's not a problem. A crazy little piece, at any rate, with the occasional typo.