|Reviews for Negotiations|
| jadis1300 9/16/11 . chapter 1
laughed myself to death
| the White Witch 1234 9/16/11 . chapter 1
very funny you have comic talent
| mirrorOfsin 5/30/08 . chapter 1
'she settled for stomping her foot and mentally counting to ten.'
Lol I personally found this very funny and strangely i could really picture it. hehe the race was a good idea. If you do more i'd certainly read XD
| Kirux 4/27/07 . chapter 1
"IT'S TIME TO DUEL!"
I'm pretty sure I died a little when i read that. I love the Narnia books and this was so wonderful. Except for a couple typos it was great.
| fledge 4/17/07 . chapter 1
Well, any humourfic about this sort of thing must necessarily BE ooc, so that's not a problem. A crazy little piece, at any rate, with the occasional typo.