Wow! I must say I got confused in there. I didn't even see the end coming!

Rami: Baka. I knew it all along.

Yume: Yeah right. You couldn't even see the end of "Cinderella" coming.

Rami: Hey, the glass slipper thing was killing me, all right?

Anyway, nice work! Write on! Yume

Another beauty! Man, I wish I knew how you did it. Anyway keep up the good work, and please finish Darkness Rising!

Alex! This was different, but nice. I was almost expecting a different ending, but all turned out alright, and I am glad. Is Darkness Rising coming along? Email me soon, and tell me how it's coming - I'm dying to know!

It's amazing how well you've written the story. I've read the comic also, and it's perfectly suited to your own version of Hyrule. Your characterizations of Link are great.

Hmm, very interseting. Short, but good! Nice job. _ -Prongs:Random Toadstool

Oh my, now I'm tempted to bug you to do this for all of the comics. But I'll be good and refrain from pestering. It's certainly nice to know that there's someone else around here old enough to have been around when the comics first came out. _ As for the story itself-what can I say other than I thoroughly enjoyed it? I love the (what to call it?) restraint with which you approach your characters. You don't slam us right into their heads and feed us their thoughts directly, and yet how they are feeling and what they are thinking is always crystal clear. Now get cracking on Darkness Rising! (Whoops. There goes my no-pester vow.)

I really liked this story a lot! I loved the whole thing! On to favorites it goes!

Back in the day, those comics *were* awesome. I've got the scans of most of them if you want...

This is cool. I've got this comic and I always loved it. It's nice to see its story as a novel.

I like this story. Very well written, only one mistake and that was using rune instead of ruin to describe the Castle in the prediction. I always love the way you describe Link.

This story was great! A grand tribute!

Awesome! I love how you gave personalities to the Wizrobe and the normal enemies and stuff.

that was very good

Hey, this story is great! It's full of great discriptions and a kickass storyline...I can see the stor scrolling and unfolding in my head! And your introduction...When I reached the end of this fic I realized ehy have you written the beginning...You're giving us the alternate ending...so if Link got out of the castle, he would have been killed and Ganon would have won, Like what you wrote in the beginning! That's a very unique style you're using! Keep it up and read my fics in your free time!

Beautifully done. The story has everything, excitment, suspense, frustration, sadness, and tenderness. You have an excellant grasp on words, and know how to use them. Keep writing! I cannot wait for the next one!