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| xLzR 2008-06-27 ch 3, | abuseI love Yassen stories. =D Update soon! |
| vampassassin 2008-06-11 ch 3, | abuseI happen to think that this chapter was exceptional, just like the others. You portray Yassen very well, much better then I've ever been able to. I really enjoy reading this and I hope for more soon |
| AleksandryaGregonovitch 2008-06-10 ch 3, | abuseUm...KGB are basically an upgraded, more connected version of the Russian Mafia. You made it seem as though they were Russian Intelligence. Correct me if that's what you wanted it to look like. Good chapter though. Update Soon! |
| AleksandryaGregonovitch 2008-05-12 ch 2, | abuseI liked it. Definitaly worth the trouble. Update Soon! |
| Deep Fried Cornpuffs 2008-05-11 ch 2, | abuseI can't wait to read more! The only suggestion I have is that you need to distinguish the direct quotations more, they were a little hard to follow. Other than that, keep up the great work! |
| vampassassin 2008-05-10 ch 2, | abuseWow, really good. There's something chilling about this story, but that very much adds to the quality of the writing. I can't wait for more :) |
| Deep Fried Cornpuffs 2007-06-11 ch 1, | abuseAwesome! It's getting really interesting! I hope you post more ^^ |
| Cyberdhampir 2007-04-24 ch 1, anon. | abuseAww, poor Yassen. Why do bad things always happen to him in these fics? And I must be really twisted because I like reading them. Hope you continue this soon cause I really wanna read more. *:P |