i like it so far, good plot. is erik really dead though?

Raoul is calculatorand sees only his interest. Are you sure he loves Christine ? And what about her ?
And Erik,is he really dead ?
Keep writing,I want to know !

It's always so nice to know you're loved for your breeding capabilities, isn't it? I hope she decks him :p

oh!! great beginning! I can't wait to see what happens next!

Excellent beginning. Interested in what will follow. I like the way you portray Christine's longing to return to music.