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| JennCorinthos 2007-05-24 ch 1,  | abuseLoved it... I absolutely loved it... JENNIFER |
| mel60 2007-04-26 ch 1, | abuseDon't know how I missed this. It's lovely. Beautiful little fic. The ambiguity works and it's amazing. |
| The Little Corinthian 2007-04-18 ch 1, | abuseO, I like it! :0P I wanted a 'post-reunion' scene SO BAD. *sigh* At least now talented people like yourself can fill in the blanks. Nice job!! :0P |
| SavvyAngel 2007-04-18 ch 1, | abuseSo beautiful... your language is amazing here, and I love this story. :) |
| marialisa 2007-04-17 ch 1, | abuseWow, your muse is in full flow at the moment! You create beautiful pictures with your words and there are a lot of examples I could choose, but this paragraph created a strong image in my head. QUOTE: A streetlight casts a thin light around the room through the window with no curtain, creating shadows that stretch and dance around them. A hand moved slightly off the bed jumps around the room from wall to ceiling to wall; a body shifted position merges with another. /QUOTE The intimacy you portray by them lying on a bed, not touching, is powerful (love how they started 3ft away and gradually moved closer - great imagery) Absolutely loved it :) |