this is really really intense, amazing. nice vocabulary, i like the twist between kitty and jean. great job[:

I liked this its well written and beautifully descriptive with out being over powering. I like how the story seems like it’s missing a third voice, it creates a sort of ach which shows Emma’s grief. At least I think so.

I liked this quite a lot.

I'm guessing the gist of it is Emma somehow grieving because of Jean's death by kissing Kitty?

If it is, that's so heartbreakingly bittersweet.

It was wonderful all the same. (: