 Beatleboy62 2009-11-14 . chapter 99Well, I'm not sure what one more reader means to you, but here goes nothing:
The story? Wonderful. Imaginative. Thought provoking. I've laughed when the times were funny, I've gotten annoyed at Silver when he forgot to do things with Blaze, I personally wanted to wring Tails' throat during the interagation. But most of all, you were able to bring out the hardest emotion of all (well, in my opinion at least), sadness. I shed a tear while listening to Mighty's family tradgedy, gasped not knowing what happened to Tikal and Knuckles, and even felt the same sadness when Maple was ripped away from Honey. I started reading this three days ago telling me I would only read 10 chapters a night. That worked the first two nights, but now It's 2:50AM I just finished reading. Well, I only have to wait till monday for chapter 100.
Well, I hope you read my overly dramatic review and give yourself a pat on the back for getting yourself a new and loyal fan. Tomorow, I will start to read your other stories as at the moment, I can feel my eyes drifting off to sleep.
-Beatleboy62- |
 Dark Maelstrom 2009-11-09 . chapter 99Just when I thought this was over, Blaze's other half gets a hold of her again. But honestly, I don't see how the scars from this situation could ever heal Blaze's life again. But I still hope for her as she does not deserve this. Update soon! |
 Elkpelt 2009-11-09 . chapter 97This story gives me goosebumps! I like this story. Keep it up! |
 Alyssacookie 2009-11-05 . chapter 97This rocks! Please, finish it already!
Silvaze4ever! |
 Shadaze4ever 2009-11-03 . chapter 97ooh, this is so intense! plz update soon! |
 Keiji the Coyote 2009-11-03 . chapter 97THIS IS GREAT! I've been a long time fan of alot your fanfictions, and I am just DYING to see the next chapter! Please hurry! |
 Lord Kelvin 2009-11-03 . chapter 97Gloomy learning curve.
It's sad that readers don't get the message that most longer fictions convey. Older account IDs are supposed to be 'intimidating' and at least that should motivate them to post more coherent reviews.
At first I hadn't noticed the things being a bit shaky here. While Shadow does offer a bit of explanation, wouldn't you say his tiny part was redundant?
You've had me going for a moment. Naivete and silliness, I guess. When Silver thought "If anyone deserves to be called town hero, it’s" I've honestly hoped he wouldn't be the girl, for once. The talk with the flame thing was somewhat informal, too informal, considering how everyone is physicaly inferior to that beast. Though, I can't say that for sure, not knowing what exactly stands behind the words. Too informative nonetheless. When something admits to lots of truths and then speaks too much, we see a step towards generic villains...that skip on commas.
The conversation during the fight didn't really give me the 'feel' of the action. Shadow's loss looked downright unnatural. Sure, it was a nice fight, but the final blow came out completely anti-climaxic.
I really don't see a reason to stop reading here, but this chapter keeps going in a certain downward spiral. Since it's not too much left to go, I beg of you to pull it up before the very end, at least. I've seen several authoresses mess up by the very end. That's just unfair...to you. I mean, nearly everyone has a horrible intro and picks up later.
Let's not have too many exceptions.
Have a nice, abuse-free day. |
 Silver Fizz 2009-11-03 . chapter 97I'm still reading! This chapter was exciting... can't wait for the next one. |
 Secret Blaze 2009-11-03 . chapter 97 Is this me or is there hints of Silvaze coming along? *yay* :D
If so keep going, but I read your fanfic every week, so please keep going, and remember, more Silvaze please, less siver x honey (none at all would be just perfect)
Thanks
Secret |
 Skye Burnz 2009-11-03 . chapter 97This story is excellent. I'm just wondering, is Mephiles going to appear in it any time soon?
I love this fanfiction so much, you should seriously consider writng a book. You have the patience (2 years! **!) and skill :D
Update soon |
 Inara Harame 2009-11-02 . chapter 97 Hey ! I'm still here! I just forget to review. - nervous laugh - anyway please do a chappie from Botan's I mean Blazes pov wow I'm reading WAY too much Hiei and Botan fanfiction Go YuYu Hakusho! Anyway I've read every chapter of this fic and I must say you are awesome! Are you going to ever have some SilverxBlaze fluff? Personaly I love the couple. Can't wait until you update again! I wish I had a fanfiction acount so I could post and add you and your story to my favorites! Ja ne! |
 Dark Maelstrom 2009-11-02 . chapter 97Looks like we're finally getting somewhere here. Silver has finally stepped up now that he knows what he truly wants, and I know he'll be able to break through and end the battle while saving Blaze from the flames inside her. Update soon! |
 Shadaze4ever 2009-10-30 . chapter 96no wonder why i dont like rouge... well i dont like her for many reasons... they better not kill shadow and blaze! anyways, another great chapter! |
 Dark Maelstrom 2009-10-26 . chapter 96This is getting real interesting. GUN is falling deeper into a pit of corruption and evil, and it's unfortunate that only Silver, Rouge, and Miles can see the problems behind these quick decisions. I only hope that someone will step up and destroy the problems of Blaze and GUN without reducing the town we know and love to nothing. Update soon! |
 Lord Kelvin 2009-10-26 . chapter 95Faust wasn't meant to ever appear on stage.
Like this one shouldn't be printed for huge paper costs. I swear, if someone prints this story in whole, Greenpeace will be taking a piece of you to hell. It's logical, by the way.
I'm rather fortunate to review a few chapters at a time, as you haven't provided too much content in each. Unlike other authors, you're able to provide a wholesome point of view in every part. Though, I can't really be very pleased on the amount of content starting chapter 93. Busyness?
It's rather interesting that you portray extreme heat in this story. Personally, I haven't witnessed a forest fire to raise the general temperature. Though, I do know that even a gas tank can make your face feel very hot for a moment from half a mile away. Shadow's mention of fighting 'against a battle' in 92 made me frown for an obvious reason. Though, you know everything else I could pick up: being too straightforward with the plot and forgetting supplementary action elements, going into basics during fights et cetera.
This is where I reach Honey's chapter. Despite its length, it's more rewarding than the first of the series I'm covering today. Contrast and general rest from seeing to redirect towards feeling. Annoying in terms of personality, but since you've managed to cause emotion from this reader, it's a bonus.
Aside for a to-too confusion with taking hits, Knuckles' chapter had little to comment on. It's a continuation of the previous worries. Looking at this longish arc, I can't find any sequence other than chronological. Whether that's a good thing...I'm not sure.
At this point, anyone willing to give up bits and pieces about the plot becomes a valuable asset. 'not as advance as' among the rest, but it's generally original, considering the different emotional pattern. Rarely would I find a friendship between Espio and Shadow. Pfft, I fiddled with that when I've found the site, and it was fun. Too bad friendship is made sexual no matter what.
No whining, regardless. If you're ever bored, count how many complaints you've had over pairings without a feasible reason.
Have a nice, abuse-free day. |
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