Ohh, I like it! I love your chibi Vegeta series. I read the other fics on and figured that the other one, Flames, was on . I'm glad I decided to look for it. I really enjoyed reading it, and as usual the ending was my favorite part. It was pretty much perfect. :)

this is a very good story and so were the other two

I"m back! Normally I don't like self-advertising, but Distorted was just too good to pass up a shot at reading another of its kind ;-P

Wow, what a nice little one shot. I could see Vegeta standing out in the snow perfectly in my mind. You really do have a knack for vividly portraying both the setting and Vegeta himself. ;-) I was just getting ready to complain that this was too short before I came across your ending...and then I realized that it's perfectly fine the way it is.

So much weight, all carried in that small sentence..."Fire does not cleanse...it blackens." It suits the idea of planet purging perfectly well. You're very good at analyzing the world in which teenage Vegeta lives, y'know that? *pokes* I can just see him "glaring" at the building as well. ^_^ You know what else is REALLY...and I mean REALLY nice? It's the fact that you're one of the few authors around here that has a pretty darn decent vocabularly...and...gasp! You can write with good grammar. I get so tired of seeing these two-bit pairing pieces that absolutely murder the English language. So, double thanks, for writing another excellent one-shot, and for doing it decently :-P. I'll be keeping my eye on you.

-Da General

wow...

Awesome...

Never had read with such detail a story about purching...

Wow... That's so good. Like an indepth look into Vegeta's past, without actually revealing any real personal details...kinda... that didn't make sense, did it? Oh well, I'll get it next time. It's very good though. Love the last sentence; that's gonna stick with me for years ;)

that was so god!
(it me heena by the way!)
love it!
hehehe