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Allyarra 7/20/07 . chapter 10At first I was upset that Squall ddin't go back with her, but then I thought about it and knew he never would if he stayed in character. Therefore I loved the way this chapter turned out, I just hope Squall and Rinoa meet up again sometime soon. Can't wait for the next chapter! |
Lari-itza 7/20/07 . chapter 10wao... please update sonn.. I really need to know what happens next... |
Ojuuh 7/20/07 . chapter 7Aww. :'l I was tearing up throghot that chapter. Damnit why must I always tear up when I read your stories! This is what? About the 500th time now but I love em anyway. :D |
Ojuuh 7/20/07 . chapter 5Why! WHY! His face.. :( I know have this realy scred up image of his face being all disjointled in my head :( But that was really great chapter! Why didn't he want to see Rinoa gain and everybody! He's such a loser sometimes.. Anyways onto the next! :D |
Ojuuh 7/20/07 . chapter 4Wow. What a way to end a chapter! Luckily though, I don't have to wait for the net one muhahahahaha! Classic work! I don't like that guy Cale though... . Onfourth to the next chapter! :D |
Ojuuh 7/20/07 . chapter 2I just read over this chapter again to refresh my memory and here at the end of it I realised something.. 'Siber' and 'Lon' have names like Seifer and Leon! :D And! Siber has blue eyes which is the opposite of Seifer! Now.. ahem, i don't know if this was done intentially or not but sure, it probably has nothing to do with anything but ah well.. I just wanted to sound smart. :) These people are scary btw... . Nice chappie! :D |
Aurona 7/20/07 . chapter 9Laguna: "Aw man, I smeared my signature!" Heeheehee, that was so cute! I just had to say that. Hrmgh, I don't have anything to say this time, really. Although I say that in every review before shooting off on some dumb tangent about the Rinoa-Squall-Cale love triangle. - But this time, there's really nothing. A set-up chapter to usher in the next one. Which is fine: those kinds of chapters are necessary sometimes. So I'm looking forward to their second reunion, and I hope it's a tearjerker. Great job so far! |
JayLiyah 7/19/07 . chapter 9Wow, you update fast. Thank you for not making us wait in anticipation for weeks. :P This chap was written well, and I liked that you still played upon Rinoa's frustrations. I would have loved to see more of Squall's turmoil here, but I guess you're saving that for next chap. Can't wait for next update. |
J.L. Zielesch 7/19/07 . chapter 9Ah, finally they meet "again" and , surprise, suspense. I'll be waiting the next chapter then. |
Allyarra 7/19/07 . chapter 9I absolutely adored the chapter, I'm so glad that Rinoa didn't just forgive him instantly and that they need to talk things over before they can move on. Some authors do that and I find it incredibly annoying seeing as that would never actually happen, who would forgive Squall for what he did instantly? Anywho, can't wait for the next update! |
amenta bennu 7/19/07 . chapter 9oh i hope they have a nice heartfelt conversation... |
Ojuuh 7/19/07 . chapter 3Hrmm I never read the prequel to this so and Selphie has died and Squall is missing? o.O I think I should go back and read that. But! I shall be back! |
JayLiyah 7/18/07 . chapter 8Please continue, please! You have to continue this soon! I was waiting for this reunion ever since they were separated! Rinoa has every right to be upset and angry at the fact that they both kept it from her. I thought you wrote her emotions quite well. She reacted like how I thought she would. I have a feeling you brought in Cale for a reason, and I'm thinking his part isn't over yet. ;D It'd be interesting if she decided to date him, while Squall knows and has to hide his jealousy. You cannot just end it like that though, and expect us to wait for long! Update and soon! |
Allyarra 7/18/07 . chapter 8I loved it, especially Rinoa's reaction! Update as soon as you can, please? |
StarlightFilly 7/18/07 . chapter 8no Squall you meany! _ |