yet another great one-shot, the ending is quite sad... but oh well, that's the beauty of it. you are certainly a gifted writer.

Very dark...but awesome.

Psychologically very interesting. I'm glad you left it the way it was. take care- Req

I already told you how creepy and wonderful this was. The writing is superb here, although I have chills from reading it, a great snippet of horror here, and you captured the desperation perfectly.

--Aileene

woah...
o.o
i loved this; really do hope you do continue this :D
but i can just imagine...
:P