It's a very good story, I hope that you will post new chapters soon.

Aileene,

glad you are writing things again- or maybe there was no lag, as I got about 20 fanfiction notifications today. I like the portrayal of guilt and worry in Hurt- and the conversations among the young men ring true to me- maintaining that subtle distance that menfolk like me maintain even with our old long-held friends.

I feel cheated! I didn't recieved the sign of this story! good thing I was looking into profiles...

Wow, such an idea. The angsty part of the aftereffects of a battle... and an injuried character. You really have a way to pick your themes, don't you? Really good idea! Sad, but workable. I really like Cy's monologue (talking with BB), and well, all dialogues for that matter... I don't know, but in this situations is like all the things said means someting beyond. Just a tought...

Long review. Basically, keep writing! :D

Great going!

Deep. UPdate.

-Allie

Great chapter! I love these little heart-to-heart talks between the team... very touching. Can't wait for chapter 3, so update soon :D

i liked this chapter very much. The way you bring the characters of your stories to life is amazing. Please keep the updates for this and your other stories coming, and thanks...Gerry

That was a very powerful and moving first chapter. The scene between Robin and Raven really touched my heart. I really enjoyed this first installment very much. Please update when you can, and thanks...Gerry

Oh, poor BB, poor Raven. So sad, please update soon.

Perfect.

-Allie