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loscar
2008-07-07
ch 3,
abuseOH MY GOD!
I love it! it´s hilarious and sad at the same time. poor ted! evil castello!
My nomination for the best sentence ever written in a fanfiction (sorry spoiler): "We've tried shooting it, stabbing it, poisoning it, electrocuting it, burning it, and suffocating it, but still we've yet to figure out how to rid the world of death."
LOL GOLD!
what an irony...

so.. reading on here

~loscar
Jake Caldefore
2008-06-27
ch 15,
abuseHey there. Awesome story! Anyways, I think I've caught a mistake. Not a major one, but you forgot the disclaimer for Charmed.

Well, that's it! I really enjoyed this story and hope to read more from you!

Keep writing,
Jake
darkelf1600
2008-06-21
ch 22,
abuseGood Story. I was actually surprised when Dr. Cox died and replaced Dan (who I'll miss btw). I'm interested to see how his place (and job) in the afterlife will turn out.

I felt really bad for JD when all his papers, pictures and stuff were destroyed. I really wanted to hug him! Hopefully it will end up being some form of closure.

Overall this was well done and I'm glad I found it. Now, I'm off to read another of your stories (I'm so glad you are doing multiples!)

amd what's with the gun in JD's locker. Was the Janiter lying or what? If not then where the hell did it come from?
Thunder-Kun
2008-06-15
ch 22,
abuseThat was amazing! You managed to mix in everything from both the shows and it was just great. I can't wait to read the rest of the series.
katty12
2008-06-09
ch 22, anon.
abusekool loved it u really are a good writer i skipped this story like ten times untill i got bored and read all the storys i miss and to tell i wish i didn't skip the story
Nyxelestia
2008-05-22
ch 22,
abuseWhat a WONDERFUL story. (You must be getting sick of reviews from me ^_^).

Anyway, as for the last few chapters, I didn't think Cox or JD were being OOC at all. I mean, with everything JD was going through, I'd actually expect needing that kind of relief to be more frequent with him.

Naming that puppy Danny was great, really. I love the whole thing with the insurance money and all (and how JD figured that it was just Dan's plan for the puppy). Though even if it was, it was really great how he was still caring for JD, even after...redying? Or should we stick with promoted?

Anyway, the way that puppy shredding all those obituaries and stuff was great. And I take it this has more of a symbolic meaning than you're letting on? I'd go read the next story, but I gotta fly. But I'll be sure to read and review as soon as I can.

The way that JD took Cox out to see his own grave the same was Dan did for him was awesome. Such a mirror effect. (Oh, by the way, that doctor's emblem with the snakes around the staff? That's called a caduceus - just thought you'd like to know).

As for Steve...I'll be honest and say that almost as soon as you revealed Steve to be a plague division reaper and his general anger and hatred he kept within (aka early on, can't quite pin when exactly), I suspected he had something to do with this - especially "lab assistant". But, I'm good at predicting plotlines, so don't be too worried.

Anyway, awesome story. As soon as I can, I'll be reading this story's sequel - and believe me, I can't wait!
Nyxelestia
2008-05-22
ch 17,
abuseBefore I go on (again), I must say, I love all the characters you're bringing in here one way or another. ^_^ (Especially since for one, they're all shows that I actually watch, so far).
Nyxelestia
2008-05-20
ch 10,
abuseOkay, before I go on, I am absolutely LOVING this story. Your writing is amazing, and I absolutely love Dead Like Me (even though I've only seen a few episodes). And because my main fandom/obsession is Psych, I honestly guessed that Shawn Gorvick was the Shawn Spencer from Psych ages ago.

Just wanted to let you know. I'm off to read more, and I highly doubt I'll be disappointed if your writing stays this great!
Lal Mirch
2008-03-18
ch 22,
abuseWhat a freaking SOB! So Steve was the one who released the virus?! Ugh! He should get shot in the head! Dx
Marie Terensky
2008-03-09
ch 10,
abuseive been to bugaboo creek. :D ..is dan gunna make rowdy alive..i know theres no way for y ou to answer this but im a chatty person.. :D
Moon Ecstasy
2008-03-07
ch 3,
abuseI've always wondered what was with the janitor myself.
Hehehehehehehe
Anyway good fic, can't wait to see what happens next. So I shall return to my reading.
Meco-lia
2008-03-07
ch 22,
abuseabsolutly fantastic fanfiction!! well done
Kittie
2008-03-06
ch 22, anon.
abuseOh my.
That... was epic. :'D That was an amazing end to this story.
I am -SO- excited for the sequel! o3o

OMAIGAWD. o.o STEVE. Is the baddie!? I didn't really expect that... I thought he was just a jerk. o.o

... -perches and waits for sequel- >:3
qwerty
2008-03-06
ch 22,
abusenice work I loved it, keep up the great work.
Taura Callisto
2008-03-05
ch 22,
abuseVery nicely written, I give it a 12 out of 10 and a standing ovation. ;) I'll be looking forward to the continuation.
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