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Sealson
2009-01-30 . chapter 1
So sad that they never got to be together in the end...:(
Rohain Tahquil
2008-08-12 . chapter 1
AW! so sad! so beautiful! i loved it!
Obsidian.Jade.Love
2008-02-20 . chapter 1
I'm... Teary eyed. Im a sucked for these kind of fanfics :P I love this. You're an excellent writer :)
daisycutters
2008-02-09 . chapter 1
oh this is so sad! i almost cried. those poor star-crossed lovers!
ShipperTrish
2007-09-26 . chapter 1
Ok, that was excruciatingly heartwrenching especially for someone who's completely devoted to KakaSaku! But great job for writing such an angst-ridden story! =)
T_T
2007-08-24 . chapter 1
NO

poor Kakashi
Tai Lei
2007-07-13 . chapter 1
Great story I really like it. I think that you should make a sequal. Keep on writing :)
prescripto13
2007-06-03 . chapter 1
That was so heartbreaking!
anon
2007-06-02 . chapter 1
SO SAD. So so sad. My eyes are teary. Why did she do that? Kakashi would have been much better. Martyrdom is stupid for all involved. Maybe sasuke would have found someone who actually loved him. Ha, that's a question, will HE be faithful? Thanks for the fic :)
noyb
2007-05-28 . chapter 1
I think that you should add more to this story, and more in sequell, as to what kakashi might do. or what sauske might say or do when he find her unhappy and in love with someone else. what do you think? maybe you could add something like sakura is pregnant with kakashi's child that would make thins a littel interesting.
Asanisan
2007-04-27 . chapter 1
That has to be one of the most depressing things I have ever read. If that was your goal, you accomplished it magnificently.
Just One
2007-04-27 . chapter 1
WHAT is that thing you have with amazingly impressive one-liners?!

In your other fic, The Most Innocent Kiss, there's this line that goes 'He's alive, he's alive, he's alive.' That's shocked me as much as this one: "It was his goodbye."

You're awesome like that. Anyhow... Keep it up with the KakaSaku angst. It works well for you, I think. I'm a fan.
SakuraHatake
2007-04-21 . chapter 1
Oh!! Poor Kakashi!!
Is it a One-shot or you wil write others chapters!? That would be nice! I love it!
Ceil Amour
2007-04-20 . chapter 1
OMG this is so sad, I actually cried, and that never happens!
Norikoko
2007-04-19 . chapter 1
WHAT!?!?!
NO!

YOU CAN'T ;_;!

ARRGH ._.
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