omg...she died... T^T

This is really sweet though. how soifong describes what happens and the change to yoruichi.. so sad though

more?

That...
That was really good. Especially chapter three. Even thinking about the plot of that chapter brings tears to my eyes. *sniff sniff* Oh what the hell! *sobs uncontrollably*
The way you described Yoruichi was simply amazing.Wait...there aren't even words to describe how well you did this fanfic.
Thanks for posting!! *wipes tears from eyes*

A cookie to you for such a good story!!

thats a sad ending,i like it

w-w-wait up...is she really gonna die?
loved the first chapter by the way)

aww cute! i like it ^.^

Ugh... Too tragic for me...

Heh... Cute and a little sexy.

Hmm... A bitter and angst-filled oneshot that leaves both nothing and everything to be desired... well done!

Ahw...

That was so unbelievably sad...Poor Soi...and Yoruichi :(

It was a really good oneshot, but just so sad...

I almost cried, but not quite.

I'll be waiting for your next chapter, though :D

aww~
that was sad..
loves it though~
^_^

this almost made me thing Soi actually dies o.o i'm not very caught up with the manga so i dont really know >.< it made me think xD

These are great! And that last chapter was so sad, and really well written. I loved it, despite the fact you killed off my fav character. I can't wait to read more.

Sad, but very well-written. Keep it up!

Hahaha! Lovely! This chapter is short yet exceptionally sweet.Hope you do continue to update.