Nice! :D Update??

I really like the story so far, keep up the good work!

Only one thing though: Elena's sister is not Shotgun, but Handgun. I haven't played the game, but i checked on the Internet (namely Wikipedia)

Still reading but admitting to being a little confused. Might have to go back to the begin and start again! Just can't remember what's going on, lol!

Neat, the whole scene with Reno and Grace was very ood in my opinion. Also, more Before Crisis characters. I foresee more BC characters popping up in future chapters... Keep up the good work!

Oh, Elena's sister, I thought it might be her. But is she inhabited by Jenova? I think she might be... I'm probably wrong though. I love the stuff with Tifa and the orphanage as well. Oh and where did you get the Before Crisis script? I've been looking for something like that for a while and I can't find anything... Anyway, loved it, thanks :)

so good! please send me your other typed stuff, and reply to my e-mail! your my hero...*cough dies*

don't stop with this story :3

Oh wow I really like this. The Vincent scene wasn't corny at all! You got his character perfect, same with Kadaj. They're the ones that really stand out, but you get all the rest fine as well. Update soon please, I love this!

Grace, Shotgun perhaps? Anyway, good chapter. The pace is slowing down a bit but nothing is wrong with the writing. Keep it up!

bah, update more, your just making excuses :# I have so much new music i need to share with you when you get back! and super job on writing this as well, even though i've already read it and the next few chapters as well.

Interesting chapter, coming together quite nicely to the original AC story. Just one minor problem, turning Shinra mansion into an orphanage doesn't fit very well to the FFVII compilation as it is still Shinra mansion in Dirge of Cerberus which takes place a year after AC. Other than that I have no other objections. Keep it up!

I think you captured the character perfectly, again only crit would be to have some more emotion, or actual thoughts running in their mind, but don't bother with the silent moody characters such as Cloud and vincent :P Reno and Tifa would be good to work on. But hey don't let me be to harsh on you, you are by far the most brilliant writer/artist i know :)

Nice to see the plot developing, you fill the gaps in AC very well. Good work!

oh!oh! i know who the mystry girl is! it's hojo! it's hojo it's it?! i so know i'm right.

haha i like renos language. super work.

yes you know i like it. tis very good!