Ooh la la!
I love the story !
And plz read my 2 and review it thx

CUTE!! Really cute!

KAWAII! please write more

Hey ya-chan!Ive read this fic and its cute..^_^...though kinda random but its nice...keep it up..^_^v

hei, i like it! i like it!

i really do!!

more! more! =)

Hi. I found this story at friendster, and I thought that you would like a critic to review this.

First of all, I found the title quite attractive. You could've made it more interesting. The plot seemed so random that I thought it was AU. It's lacking description but that's fine. And umm... Valentines and winter? Ano connect? Maganda pero talagang kailangan pa ng improvement. Kung ganun, siguro marami-rami din ang magrereview nito.

I want another one-shot. I want to test you on tragedy and angst. Titignan ko. I really demand more description on feelings. Try mong ganitong style:

His eyebrows furrowed even more. He could've done something in the first place. He could've been more aware...

Dark. But still he could feel, sense everything around him. Screams of despair, demands of agony, and the force of emptiness, all haunting him.

Mkan...

The last petal of the rose fell onto the hard pavement. He closed his eyes. He has to be strong. He must not feel a tinge of weakness. But even then, he have to blame himself.

Well... That's just a drabble. I hope this review helped.


~:MAU:~

I'm glad you like the anime, but you really should read the manga. It's so much better. Natsume's eyes, btw, are actually red :P. Just letting you know, not to be rude or anything. Your story was cute, too!

nice one..
it's kawaii..
i loved it..

girlfriend,huh? (blinked sevaral times)
ah MxN pairing so cute
bnsa q lit(pasway tlga q)
by d way as u can c nagreview q s dreaming on the radio chappie 12 n may n submit aq na d p tpos lyk dis:
elow
so haba pro...
pro may nireview p aq n ka2loy so plz 4give me =]

nice fic huh. ^_^

I don't usually like NatsuMikan. Kya, but this is cute! It was a dream come true, ne? And he layed his head on her lap! Ah, kawaii! (Okay. Coming from me, a rukaMikan fan, this sounds weird.)

And WHERE WAS RUKA? *shakes you* RUKA-SAMMA!

cute story...

I love your fic! So interesting...Haha... was the dream a permonition?

CUTE!

Natsume wasn't OOC for me he was direct and very calm.

Hehehe, it was so cute. Didn't understand some of the Japanese words though but I still loved it!

I LOVVE you. This fic is special... MWAHAHA