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| Axellia 2008-01-11 ch 190, | abuseWow. I think that is the first and only word that comes to mind about now. It has taken me five and a half months to finish this - which is probably the longest time on record! And that's nothing to do with the story because I have enjoyed reading it. More so that work, rather than life, got in the way! I do have a question - and I ask it everyone - if you were going to cast Gus to appear in the show, which actor would you use (and anything goes on that)? Yeah, I really enjoyed reading this - I'm sorry I haven't reviewed all the chapters - it probably would have helped so I could check where I was up to when I actually read, lol. i'm going to read the sequels... eventually! Hopefully, it won't take as long, but work is on the up. Again! Great work on the story - it was a completely enjoyable read! |
| sparkyCSI 2007-10-13 ch 190, | abuseI want to kill you right now...you know that right! I'm way to tired to start on the two sequels, but tomorrow is another day! (Actually tomorrow is actually today). I did have a question. In the chapter where the homicide boys litter their apartment with all the registry stuff, how did they get past the alarm system?? |
| sparkyCSI 2007-10-12 ch 95, | abuseOn that happy note...I'm going to stop her for tonight! I did manager 50 chapters this time! Anywho...gotta go to work in 7 hours, so I'll read the remaining 95 chapters after I get home tomorrow. I feel bad...I really need to write on Deja Vu, but I just gotta finish this first! Laters! |
| sparkyCSI 2007-10-11 ch 42, | abuseOk. I almost hate you right now (in the good way!). It's after 1am and I don't want to stop reading, but I can barely keep my eyes open! I really shouldn't have started this now that I'm working 50+ hours a week. I just really want to see if they ever get together! But anywho...you made me crave beignets...Been way to darn long since I've had one. **sighing in memories of Cafe au lait and beignets in the middle of the night** :D I'll pick this back up tomorrow and then hope to have it finished by Saturday night (I have to work on Sat morning and then I'm going to see The Lion King). And to think that I really need to be writing on Deja Vu right now, since I finally have inspiration for it again (Although I did just finish part of a chapter for Gotham's Heroes, so I feel semi-productive!) btw, you are not near as wordy as I am (current record for the word count in a chapter of a multiple chaptered story for me is a hair under 10,0--It was for a story I posted under Charmed). I'm glad you like Cory! Have you read A Time to Heal? If not, start with that and it'll give you a good background for how Danny and her got together. It's only 51 chapters. talk to ya later! |
| sparkyCSI 2007-10-10 ch 13, | abuseOk. So Aphina finally convinced me to find the time to read this...I must say, I'm really enjoying it. It's nice to see another OC that uses y'all as frequently as my Cory does. :D Anyway...I'll have to continue this tomorrow, since I've been up for close to 20 hours and have to be back at work in 7. I need sleep! |
| Aphina 2007-09-14 ch 190, | abuseI cant wait to see what happens lol. SOrry to here about you lack of net though |
| Aphina 2007-09-14 ch 189, | abuseWhat the hell is se playing at, If i was flack I'd be growling like hell. Poor him! |
| Shelbers 2007-09-13 ch 190, | abusenow see...thats just MEAN! teasing us all with gus accepting the proposal, and then turning around and running when she thinks the 'curse' is back...though no one got seriously hurt except for sanchez and even then that was just a shoulder wound and hes ok (if we're staying canon). and to make matters worse no new chapters until at least sept 25? evil i say. hehehe. awesome chapters even if that is one of the largest cliffs i'm hanging off of:) |
| Aphina 2007-09-13 ch 188, | abuseoMG this was such a fun chapter, I didn not see it vcoming. lol I lvoed the last line because the audience gets caught up oin the emotion of him proposing and then you bring back the humour with that line, it made melagh. |
| Aphina 2007-09-13 ch 187, | abuseHey, it was great to see the way Gus slotted into to Snow Day lead up, her prescence seemed natural. I lie the way you had someone take a bulet for her. |
| Aphina 2007-09-13 ch 186, | abuseNice short chapter , it got your point acorss. it's nice to see Mac all fmaily orinatated but at the same time it's suspicoous |
| Aphina 2007-09-13 ch 185, | abuseLMAo, I love the fact the chars are all so well rounded, I was cringing when Gus was being asked questions and things |
| Aphina 2007-09-13 ch 184, | abuseHey, fab chapter, Loved the pregnacey thing with Flack SNr at the end, it made me laugh. I love it a the Flack's its homely and syuch and I'm glad shes feeling more comfy. |
| mustlovecat 2007-09-13 ch 188, | abuseThis chapter just turned me into mush You know, it broke my heart during the actual event that there was no one really telling Flack what a wonderful job he did, no one he could just hold for comfort. That's why Gus is here :) Aww, I love Gus. I think Gus needs to magically appear on my screen for S4. I've been so intent and eager to read I didn't stop to review each chapter, but I LOVED the whole toaster scene :) And the comment to Danny about putting him into the toaster and him saying he was already hot enough LOL You're the best. Ooh, I still have 2 more chapters! woo-hoo! Suzanne |
| Mauradingknight 2007-09-13 ch 190, | abuseokay... I'm just gonna say it... you suck! and yet that was completely brilliant |