Reviews for Designated Things

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Sleepless Nights 2008-07-21 ch 28, anon.	abuseWaiting and watching
Equinox 2008-07-20 ch 28, anon.	abuseUpdates are good. Updates are our friends.
Nubian Goddess 2008-07-06 ch 28, anon.	abuseI am giggling like a maniac and clapping my hands you are awesome I can't wait for the next chapter. I am on the edge of my seat and panting for more
Nubian Goddess 2008-07-06 ch 18, anon.	abuseThis is the best high school x men story I have read. I was hesitant at first x men revolution ** me off that they made storm and adult but i digress. This is awsome... I have only read about half but... I am so giddy I can't keep a train of thought... So Im gonna finish all in al great job
Brazos 2008-07-03 ch 28, anon.	abuseWell that was not cool. I just noticed that my last message to you was accidentally posted for ch 23 instead of 27. Sorry about that. Anyway, I just wanted you to have a Happy Fourth. Have fun and stay safe.
pixie-gaia 2008-06-30 ch 1,	abusei really enjoyed reading it. It totally rocks!
Milady 2008-06-30 ch 28, anon.	abuseThe news is good. She is not a Mary Sue.
Brazos 2008-06-27 ch 23, anon.	abuseOops. After all that, I submitted it for the wrong chapter :( I was really referring to chapter 27.
Brazos 2008-06-27 ch 23, anon.	abuseOroro had a redeeming moment on the drive home. Remy said he wanted to marry her but would wait until the time was right, and she promised she would say "Yes". Wild applause! And please don't be upset by those harsh-sounding reviews. My guess is that they aren't putting you down as a writer, and are probaly not even putting down Ororo's decision to say "no". I have to agree with what Gator Bait wrote (you caught me, I enjoy reading the reviews, too!). My guess is that they are not giving you or the story negative reviews, but are actually responding to the tactless things she said. They are referring to the character, not you. Let's face it, if a character was always perfect, a story would get pretty boring. It's kind of nice to see that someone is human. I have a love/hate thing going on with her father right now. And, after all, we have no idea what you have up your sleeve for the next chapter. Hey, at least it shows they are reading your story and that they feel it is important enough to review. They're not just like, "Screw it" and just going on to something else. I tried to email this to you but I got all tangled up. Is your email or trademarked@gmail or or trademarkred@gmail ? As you've probably guessed, I don't understand this stuff very well. And I don't know how to type (although I have the fastest 2 fingers in the West!). It has taken me a long time to get this together to send this review and I was working on that email stuff for 2 days :( But I do have talents. I can wash your car! lol Anyway, I just wanted to let you know my take on things and to tell you not to get discouraged. We're all pulling for you.
Little Avis 2008-06-27 ch 28, anon.	abuseNo, but I'll throw you a bone. Touch me here.
Slightly 2008-06-27 ch 28, anon.	abuseEven if a guy has never done it, he'd never admit it.
Roo 2008-06-27 ch 28, anon.	abuseIt was understandable that she would turn him down, but--ouch. Maybe they will teach her the definition of compassion in college.
lilmiznormal 2008-06-25 ch 28,	abuseOkay , my heart did stop when she refused the proposal. A part of me wanted them to elope but you did the right thing by sticking true to her character. I just hope theyre together in the end ...my heart simply couldnt take it if it ended!!
Bayou Born 2008-06-24 ch 1, anon.	abuseShe doesn't deserve you, but she needs you. Go to her.
Valkyrie 2008-06-24 ch 28, anon.	abuseIf he wasn't totally thoughtful of her feelings, doubt very seriously that he would have even hesitated when she tensed as his fingers touched her skin. I don't think he was a virgin; he was a selfless lover. He was gentle and patient and told her what she needed to hear. Because she couldn't stand the thought of him having been with the redhead. He'd never been with Anna? Sure, right. If he could sell her that, it just shows how badly she needed to believe it. It had most likely been a purely physical thing with Anna, true. He'd never felt it as acutely with Anna as when he was with Ororo, but they had been together. If there is any doubt I direct the jury to reread the previous chapter with Anna's own thoughts at the prom. What an incredible experience for Ororo's first time. She doesn't know how truely fortunate she is to have a lover so attuned to her needs and emotions. So far, there has been no display of powers in this story, but I think his empathy has emerged,

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