 JacklynK 2007-06-20 . chapter 1Damnit, why didn't I have you on author alert?! I missed this when it got posted, but I'm glad I finally managed to find it. As always, the sexual tension you draw between the two of them is great, and Riddick hating Xander Cage is absolutely hilarious. Although something seems off to me about Riddick's diologue in a couple spots... Nothing huge, probably just me being a stickler about how much he talks. Although feel free to shrug me off, I know your general characterization of him has always been a little different than mine. |