hi there that was very cool i think you should keep the story going from that very spot and do some more on there married life like get them to there new bulit home and start getting kim preg and stuff like that theres a lot to tell keep up with the good work i give it two thumbs up and a 500 gold stars and from the sounds of this story sounds like u had some thing a little of the same action your self huh wink wink lol

I really enjoyed this fic. But that's all I can say since I'm multitasking right now. Plus, I don't want to wake up lil' Trevon. But I will say that I luved this fic. and look forward to more or at least an update. And that I'm adding you to my Author Alert List.

really good , u got there characteristics spot on Good Job!

Since you have written 'The End' u know you can't write any more chapters but I really think you should write a sequel

Hey, great story! Heehee, poor James, SO didn't need to hear that!

nice story,
i like the part with the parents in the car^^

M...Sexy...

great one, i enjoyed reading it.

You captured Ron's... Ronness in this story. I enjoyed this extremely well. I hope you finish that resident evil one. Keep writing, and I hope you will read and review my stories, Ayato.

Man, you really had Kim and Ron go at it like rabbits... :P I guess if they waited until after marriage to engage in such moments, it's got a certain amount of believability.

The critical side of me wonders why Ron reacted how he did when he and Kim were in the pool. If they'd already seen all of each other, I'd imagine his response to be a little more subtle. Then again, I may be wrong, I've never been in that position...

Other than that tiny quibble, the story was nicely written and fun to read. The ending was perfect (maybe a little clichéd, but meh), just what you'd expect from a oneshot of this nature.

Not only is this the first story I've reviewed in almost a year, it also earned my "Willk1989 Stamp of Approval" for pure Kim/Ron smuff. :)

Aww... very cute! Yay for naked post-wedding moments! Great characterizations and nice personality-filled writing.

Very cool story! can't wait to see what happens in the next story you write (update soon Plz)

That was grand! The tabloid bit was the clincher. This was funny and sexy. You definitely have a way with words.

Ron seems to be having one of the great existential debates. Am I a loser who dreams of being maried to the most amazing woman in the world? Or am I the Husband of the world's most amazing woman who dreams that he is a loser?

When in doubt, consult your friendly neighborhood naked mole rat.

just pointing out that wedding bands are placed on the left hand, not the right.