Yay! Pikachu zapped Ash! Serves 'im right for not letting Pikachu play. ^_^

HOOPLAH! Paper Mario...love that game! And Misty's reaction after losing is just like one of my friends, who always quits after 2 minutes. Please continue!

Hey, i'm serious, big animation companies need an imagination like yours, very good stories nd i mean it! =)

So cute. Now that I think about it, I actually learned about this fic from Mystery science theater 3002. And the other two but this is better.

ok, hi! I'm reviewing, so don't glare at me because it took me so long! *cough* anyways, this is funny, especially when Pikachu zaps Ash! Anyways, here's a suggestion: try making different paragraphs when different people talk. anyways, gotta add this to my faves!

Short but awesome (runs of to read Ash and door)

Is Ash in the game?

1)I liked it.

2)Unfortunately, it's too short to be used as an individual movie...
3) ...but I can use it as a short before the actual movie plays (kinda like the Pikachu Shorts).

4)Thanks for the great review.

6) Could I riff a longer Pokemon fic of yours, if you don't mind?

7) Reread 5).

8) Taste your own medicine.

well for such a short fic this is really good. I wonder how far Ash got in the game.

Ahahas. This is a funny oneshot fic. Although its short, you made it really humorous and descriptive. xD Its funny how they barely even started playing the game and stopped 5 seconds later. This is really great for your first oneshot fic. Keep up with the good work! I'll be reviewing you whenever i can :)
-Tiff

Ash is so mean to Pikachu- he deserves to be Mario and have Pikachu control him. Can't wait for your Paper Mario fanfic.

This is really funny. Ash is Evil. And a shout to those of you who read this. HOW COME Y'ALL NEVER REVIEW. i review practically every fic I read to be nice.