First, Kudos for somehow working the first Pokemon movie into the plot... I liked that. Second, WOW... I know a lot of people liked your first story better, but you have only gotten better at writing as you write more. This story was much more of a cliffhanger (including the ending) and that made me love it so much more.

The only problem is that it's really hard for me to tell when Ash is using psychic speech, or when he's thinking to himself... maybe you could bold typeface for thought, or something like that

Other than that 9/10! Great Job!

...should have let him live and continued the story

OMG! Did he commit suicide? Not good...

No, I haven't read the Legend of Mew, only cause I can't find it! Trust me, I've looked. I'd apreciate it if you could tell me where to find it.

Great! Fantastic! I can't wait to read the wonderfully written sequel.

awesomeness.

great story though not enough mewtwo

NO! I just got to the end I still liked it but WHY? :(

More long stories plz

Great Story. Sad ending, but i cant think of any other way that it could have ended.

Well done.

This fanfic is very well written. The story line is shocking all the way from the first of the sequal to the end of this second one. I have read the first and the second and I have to say how good it is.

It is rare to see such a long fanfic like this. But I must say that I was faily dissapointed about the ending. I would have liked for Ash to have become human again, but overall this is an award winning piece. Well done!

Top story! The suspense was so good, I couldn't put the story down. Come to think of it, not many professionally written stories have had me so hooked.

It became somewhat confusing towards the end. I'm pretty sure it's meant to give the impression of what Ash was experiencing, and it does it really well. Only thing is it's not clear by the end of it what all Ash's visions mean. Maybe they're answered in the sequel, we'll wait and see.

The ending was pretty shocking and pretty sad. It's not often one successfully writes a story where the protagonist solves the problem by killing themselves, but you've pulled it off.

So far, so good. I hope the rest is also good.

*narrows eyes, screeches, then runs to the sequel*

I loved your story! I thought that Mewtwo was supposed to be the dark Mew the entire time. I also like the fact that you didn't try to add in extra lines to the Mewtwo Strikes Back chapter. The only thing I found really confusing was that you didn't put names where people were talking, that was kind of confusing. I loved the story otherwise. You have inspired me to read other Poke'mon fanfics. I was really surprised by the ending, it really shocked me (pun not intended). I told a friend about your story and she says that she wants to read it just because of how mildly I described it.

Dragoness, you keep on amazing me.

This trilogy is by far one of the best written stories I've ever read. I'm already your fan.

Melchior.