Interesting drabble, however it doesn't seem to go very far when concerning what people get out of the story.

Very emotional yes, but it cuts off in such a way that it leaves the reader hanging... Probably what you were trying to accomplish, though it still leaves a tad to be desired.

Despite that, though, the way you portrayed Rangiku's emotions was very well written, kudos!

Please don't take offense to this review: i had a belt upside the head for my own stories, which is the only reason why i can even write semi-decent stories now .

I wish the best of luck to you in your future works! You have a lot of potential in writing!

Dak