|Reviews for Never Alone|
| Dakyu 5/11/07 . chapter 1
Interesting drabble, however it doesn't seem to go very far when concerning what people get out of the story.
Very emotional yes, but it cuts off in such a way that it leaves the reader hanging... Probably what you were trying to accomplish, though it still leaves a tad to be desired.
Despite that, though, the way you portrayed Rangiku's emotions was very well written, kudos!
Please don't take offense to this review: i had a belt upside the head for my own stories, which is the only reason why i can even write semi-decent stories now .
I wish the best of luck to you in your future works! You have a lot of potential in writing!