you're are making seem alot like ashe loves balthier wich she cleary never did, and she and vaan clearly had more of a connection until the director decided to be an idiot and stopped character building. still this fanfic is alright.

wonderful story. your doing a fantastic job of keeping the characters in character. i can almost here them saying it. i hope to see an update from you soon!

This complex love storyline is wonderful! I'm not much of a Vaan X Ashe fan but I love the Larsa X Penelo relationship. It was heartbreaking when you wrote the scene with Penelo and Larsa in the room. Your writing style is brilliant.

Please update!

Good story!definitely the best vaan/ashe story so far,keep updating!i love the plot.

I really enjoyed reading your story, please do continue and write more often, I'd really like to see how Vaan and Ashe turn out in this story

keep up the great work!

larsa/lamont is 12

great stuff. i hope you update soon!

Excellent story I hope you continue it soon.

this story is still interesting to me,but please dont take so long to update anymore.UPDATE SOON

It's a very interesting beginning! I like it so far! Poor Vaan, everyone is going to suspect him... Keep writing!

Wow... this story is good! It's not choppy and the pace and characters are just right. On top of that it's a good VANN/ASHE story!! please continue this story and i guess i'm a fan of now ^_^!

i cant wait to see ashe's point of view sense we just saw vaan's.UPDATE SOON

Another good chapter. Glad to see the plot moving along at a good pace, not rushed, but not dragged out either. Keep it up!

Eek! Please update soon! I hope Vaan can help Ashe recover back to full health... What heathen tried to kill her? I bet he'll kick the ass of the culprit...

According to Wikipedia, Larsa is 12. Hard to believe, right? lol. Well, I love this story, it is so good! Please update soon!

-Mel