Reviews for Tangled in Waiting

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(Guest) May 2008-08-05 ch 4, anon.	abuseI really enjoyed reading your story, please do continue and write more often, I'd really like to see how Vaan and Ashe turn out in this story keep up the great work!
ih 2008-06-29 ch 2, anon.	abuselarsa/lamont is 12
Aspexit 2008-06-04 ch 4,	abusegreat stuff. i hope you update soon!
B.Szoke 2008-04-13 ch 4,	abuseExcellent story I hope you continue it soon.
Jak4 2008-04-02 ch 4,	abusethis story is still interesting to me,but please dont take so long to update anymore.UPDATE SOON
Darkmoon Fleur 2008-01-01 ch 3,	abuseIt's a very interesting beginning! I like it so far! Poor Vaan, everyone is going to suspect him... Keep writing!
Kris 2007-10-26 ch 1, anon.	abuseWow... this story is good! It's not choppy and the pace and characters are just right. On top of that it's a good VANN/ASHE story!! please continue this story and i guess i'm a fan of now ^_^!
Jak4 2007-09-03 ch 3,	abusei cant wait to see ashe's point of view sense we just saw vaan's.UPDATE SOON
howdoideletemyaccounthere 2007-09-03 ch 3,	abuseAnother good chapter. Glad to see the plot moving along at a good pace, not rushed, but not dragged out either. Keep it up!
Tiger5913 2007-09-02 ch 3,	abuseEek! Please update soon! I hope Vaan can help Ashe recover back to full health... What heathen tried to kill her? I bet he'll kick the ass of the culprit...
Supermel Returns 2007-08-01 ch 2,	abuseAccording to Wikipedia, Larsa is 12. Hard to believe, right? lol. Well, I love this story, it is so good! Please update soon! -Mel
Mariagoner 2007-07-27 ch 1,	abuseOh my but I'm enjoying this so far. I don't usually tend to find Vaan/Ashe stories so very realistic or convincing but you've matured Vaan up nicely and actually made him the sort of man that commands attention... and not only because he's such a proficient thief as well! ;) And of course, everyone knows I adore Larsa/Penelo and I love the tangled knots you've thrown into their relationship here. Larsa is convincingly smitten and wonderfully aware of just how many problems there are between them... and I can only hope you go into Penelo's POV more eventually! Oh, I'm sure you'll have a few curve balls to throw there too...
Adrian Leonheart 2007-07-19 ch 2,	abuseWhat took you so long? Anyway. I must say I am quite impressed by this fanfic. This is one of the very few fanfics I've read that is this close to perfection. As far as I could see, there weren't any spelling and grammatic errors. The angle of the story is quite pleasing. You're way of describing the each scene is superb. I also liked the way you compared Dalmasca to Archadia and how you described Larsa's upbringing. You definitely did a good job rendering rendering the characters. It takes impressive skills to make a drama of this type whilst not making things too SAPPY. Transitions were great too and very natural. One thing that really caught my attention is the way you write. The sentences felt very fluidic and I didn't have to exert any additional effort in reading them. Reading felt very natural which which in turn made reading quite a pleasure. There weren't any awkward moments. YOU'RE WORD-PLAY IS ONE OF THE BEST I'VE SEEN. Update soon or I'm SO gonna sue you... ;)
dark drow 2007-07-18 ch 2, anon.	abusewelcome back you have been missed! :D and the story is moving along at an interesting pace, i have no constructive critisisms for you, you have good transitions,smooth story telling, i see no spelling errors, and every one is in charecter, bueatiful the only thing i could ask is for you too keep writing there is always room for improvement :P,oh and from what i read/heard/gathered Larsa is 12 years in FF12 o.o , of course with the the mentality of a person in their late twenties early thirties xD. hope to see you write again soon thank you for continuing to write such an interesting story^^
Tiger5913 2007-07-17 ch 2,	abuseAhh, I really like this story a lot... I love well-written Vaan x Ashe. I can't wait to see more of this fic. ^_^ And I hope that Penelo will get over Vaan so he can be with Ashe, and then Larsa can have his lady as well. Happy ending for everyone!

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