Really fun story :) And it was great to see a Merlin Conspiracy fic - there are so few of those, or of any Diana Wynne Jones books!

Lovely! Just the kind of epilogue I've been craving.

Thanks for writing a Merlin Conspiracy story - there aren't enough.

We also need more Dark Lord of Derkholm - please?

Great writing!

You are right that this is basically the only Merlin Conspiracy fic, but I really liked it. It's been awhile since I read it myself, but I liked how you wrote this. I think you portrayed the characters well.

YAY! A "Merlin Conspiracy" story! I've been looking for one, and here you are! AWESOME!

Nice! A lot better than my attempt... _

Lexie,

I like how you made Dora practically like she was in the book, and how you described them as adults. you did misspell "magic" as "magick" in the 5th chapter, 6th para.

Thanks!

Adorable! Just the sort of thing I was looking for!

And just the sort of thing the characters would do!

Ah, finally some Merlin Conspiracy fanfic!

This is wonderful, really in-character (which is especially hard when writing their POV too) and a nice little conclusion. Really made my day, thanks

it was great! thank you for posting it. i've always wondered what happened after the merlin conspiracy. please please please please please please please write more!

*Bows to your awesome*

too bad it's only a onshot thought. If you ever get the urge to right more Please do so, Wonderful.

Wow, really great story. Your story seems so professional. Like you are really published or something. I would love to read more stories like this one.

That was great! I thought they were perfectly in character, which isn't the easiest thing in the world. Hooray!

Please please please write more Merlin Conspiracy/Deep Secret stories! You're very good at them. You capture Nick and Roddy quite well. Good job.

I like it! I always wondered what happened to Nick and Roddy...this story was full of poise. Thanks for that. I don't think I can deal with pink sparkely fluff in the Merlin Conspiracy universe. And I'm glad that Roddy was 20. a good age. and I'm glad nick was shy. you stay in character well.