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PatryTrusky 2008-02-08 ch 11,	abuseWow!! I love all the story!! It´s wonderful!! And the end..."With a wildly beating heart, she retrieved a pen from her purse, turned over his hand, and wrote on his palm. No hearts or arrows or smiling faces. Just three simple words. Each engraved in her being"(...)"With the softly lingering jazz notes from Mac's dedication filling the air, folding around them, Danny spoke against Lindsay's ear, his whispered words vibrating through her soul. "I love you too.""... the best...after all they could overcome!!It´s...I have no words to describe...I just... I love it!!Have you thought about a sequel?? It could be good!!Really, think about it!
loca 2007-09-13 ch 11, anon.	abuseWow great story ... and that last chapter, well, it just didn't feel finished until I read that! Wish I'd been able to find it earlier and comment on the chapters as you wrote them. Maybe next time!! :) I thought I'd orginally found our story on dlchem. I read the first chapter and loved it, but didn't have time to finish it all. But then when I went back, I couldn't find it. I still can't. But sure glad I found it here! Great writing!
marialisa 2007-07-05 ch 11,	abuseI did promise I'd review on here as well! Bet you thought I'd forgotten lol I love the whole story - you wove it so tightly and used the whole team so well it was such a fantastic read. I'm glad you added the final chapter - it was good to see how Danny was coping from Lindsay's POV and I loved the conversation between Stella and Sheldon. As for the final scene...well, my heart just about melted. Wonderful fic - now we need another one!
cam-is-hot 2007-06-29 ch 11,	abuseAW, that was such a cute ending!
Aquila1 2007-06-24 ch 8,	abuseYou've certainly done well in creating a sense of urgency with this chapter. It's a little jarring in places, but you've really ratcheted up the intensity. I'm enjoying this and can't wait to turn the page :)
Aquila1 2007-06-24 ch 6,	abuseOh boy! You're doing an excellent job building this up into a fury. I'm impressed that you stuck to your guns on keeping this story dark. You've handled it well so far and I'm anxious to read the rest.
Booth-Bones4life 2007-06-24 ch 11,	abuseI loved the whole story...for the best part was the ending...Great Work.
nikki.02 2007-06-22 ch 11,	abusesquabbles like a cartoon amazing! D/L action + good story line = ultimate D/L fic!! ^.^
Judith0912 2007-06-19 ch 11,	abuseGreat chapter :) Loved reading this story. Well done :)
JennCorinthos 2007-06-18 ch 11,	abuseAMAZING! AMAZING! I absolutely loved this story... Now I am going to re-read the whole thing again... This was great.. Great writing... You made sit on the edge of my sit, wonder what the hell is going on... And you did make me shed a few tears... So I have to say great story... JENNIFER
The Little Corinthian 2007-06-17 ch 11,	abuseThis has been a fantastic fic! I've very much enjoyed seeing how this story played out. Fantastic! :0P Very very nice job!!
Prefect Rachel 2007-06-17 ch 11,	abuseAn excellent ending, and a huzza on the choice of movies! The Mummy is one of my all time favourites. I can recite probably almost the whole thing. My favourite part of this whole chapter, though, is probably the fact that Mac wrote a song for his team. That's so caring, and so Mac.
Kaoli water goddess 2007-06-17 ch 11,	abuseSuch a good ending. I like it.. subtle, yet so romantic. I can see the team providing for a little getaway, especially after what the two of them were put through. Good job!
Aquila1 2007-06-10 ch 4,	abuseOk, so I'm way behind in my reading. I've finally found time to sit down and catch up a bit. Excellent chapter. You did a terrific job, as always framing each scene. You conveyed the desperation of the situation well.
kokiri fairy 2007-06-05 ch 10,	abusewow, great stuff! can't wait for the next chapter

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