I hope you're not sick of seeing these reviews from me...
I think it was awesome with the skill and style that you wrote with...
And I felt like crying when Don was making his last, gentle entreat to his family...

Beautiful..

Wow! This was an awesome poem, Pi. Nice job and very heartfelt. You are a good writer.

The Bubbly One,
Shell

That was absolutely beautiful and heartfelt. Thank you for writing such an amazing poem.

That was absalutely breathetaking...My teacher taught one of the victoms that were in the shooting, and the morning after the shooting during the moment of silence we were asked to think of the victom and all the other victoms...so, this was really touching

well i'm speechless...almost anyway!

That was lovely!

never forget those we love and miss.