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dbzgtfan2004
2009-10-05 . chapter 1
This is a good story. Please continue. Kim and Ron forever.
Astra Leo
2009-09-19 . chapter 9
Great story! Please continue to write! YO JOE!
kim's 1 fan
2009-08-23 . chapter 9
Hey there C.C.,
I love what you did with this chapter.
The c.o.b.r.a. song from G.I JOE the movie fit perfectly into the action, and the story keeps getting better and better.
But I'm worried though, if COBRA already knows that Shego will betray them, how are they going to kill her?
Having so much battle experience, she'll be expecting something evil.
I love it, please hurry and continue.
God Bless,
Larry
kim's 1 fan
2009-08-23 . chapter 8
Another great chapter C.C. ,
I love the way you intergrated Kim Possible characters, and G.I. Joes.
Question though, will Kim ever become a G.I. Joe?
Will Shego ever avenge her brothers?
I love the story so far.
God Bless,
Larry
taz0718two@aol.com
2009-08-20 . chapter 9
MAN THIS STORY IS JUST GETTING GOOD PLEASE KEEP IT GOING DONT STOP NOW AS A G.I.JOE FAN I SAY UR DOING A FINE JOB WITH THIS PERSONALLY I WOULD HAVE PEARED SHANA WITH DUKE LIKE IN THE CARTOON SHOW BUT HEY WHAT WORKS FOR ME WORKS FOR THE OTHER BUT PLEASE DONT STOP NOW MAKE IT INTO A 200 PLUSE PAGE STORY AND YO JOE
Heero Mccloud
2009-08-20 . chapter 9
Great chapter like how you created a new saying for kim
(Nothing can stop a Stoppable)

Please hurry up and write more chapters i can't wait to see what happans and what the big secret is please write more soon.
Ninja Master
2009-08-19 . chapter 9
Great ch! Up date soon!!
Kyuubi-Titan
2009-08-19 . chapter 9
Ill feel bad for Ron if Kim's cheating on him with Scarlet. But that would be hott. And I did just recently see a Haji bootleg of GI JOE. The quality sucked, movie was super fuzzy half the time, but other than not being able to make out half of it it was really cool.
Quathis
2009-08-17 . chapter 9
The line from "So The Drama" did fit well in that spot of the story. Kim's actions almost make me wonder about buns and ovens and not the kind that Kim would blow up. . .

Loved having Snake Eyes take over the interrogation after Metal Head made all those comments about Scarlet. Very ironic and funny.
BlueEyedBrigadier
2009-08-17 . chapter 9
Let's see...$50 says Kim's prepping to join the Joes in a similar path that Scarlett took, and since you nicked a line from So the Drama? Cobra Commander's done a Drakken and managed to get control of a major company or organization where he can put the missiles and stolen designs to some crazy-** use. Have to say the plot point of everybody but Shego knowing she's a Joe mole is a neat point ;D

Awesome stuff as usual, Classic Cowboy! can't wait to what revelations will be uncovered next!
ReedStoppable
2009-08-17 . chapter 9
Awesome chap...love the use of the movie intro song. Can't wait to see where all of this is going, keep up the good work my friend.
CajunBear73
2009-08-17 . chapter 9
Both sides have their own snitches and something tells me that the baddies have a leg up on the good guys... Yeah, definitely a play on StD there with the plans that Cobra Commander has.

Yeah, something's got Kim a bit nervous and I hope it ain't bad news for her and Ron...

And we'll find out soon, I hope.

CB73
Sentinel103
2009-08-17 . chapter 9
Well, what could our little Kimbo be hiding. I hope she's OK and isn't sick. Maybe Wildcard/Ron can make her feel better.

SO the scheming COBRA is up to no good as normal.

Let Snake Eyes give them all to Hanna and see what happens.

Good update CC,

Larry (Sentinel 103)
Katsumara
2009-08-17 . chapter 9
Oh boy. What an exciting chapter. I loved it.

The start worried me as I thought James may have bitten the dust, but luckily, the Joes have great timing when it comes to coming in and stopping Cobra. Seeing the "Cobra!" and "YO JOE!" repeated a ton really, *really* reminded me of the old cartoon. Great work there. Seeing Shego there with Cobra is so sad, but I guess it's just something she has to do. Also, it seems like Cobra thinks that she's a mole for the Joes eh? Uh oh. I hope she'll be okay if she does go with the good side.

Also, as far as James and Vivian goes, I was almost worried that something was going on between the two, but thankfully there isn't. There's been a couple stories here and there that had James being a cheater, and I really don't think he has that in him. Good stuff written with him though. I like him in this story.

The Kim and Ron bits were, as always, wonderful. As far as what Kim is hiding.. well she obviously loves Ron dearly, so nothing too bad. Maybe I'm thinking that she's... well. I won't say it. I'd hate to spoil if I'm possibly right, which I doubt I am. Either way, I hope she passes her BAR! Anything's possible for a Possible, and when she marries Ron, she'll just be completely unstoppable. :D

I played Mass Effect a while back, but I don't remember the dialogue too well sadly, so I couldn't spot the line.

Either way, great work as always! I can't wait for the next chapter, and I *do* think Metal Head wet himself. Ron's big bro seems like the Batman interrogator of the Joes, so I'm sure he doesn't fail. That part with Metal Head was hilarious, by the way.

Keep up the good work!
airnaruto45
2009-08-17 . chapter 9
not bad double C also are you gonna update your KP Street fighter X-over soon?
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