Whew. Rather dark but it's cool nonetheless.

Interesting. I wonder why she kissed him though, first time round. LOL phoenix is a masochist. XD

OMG. YEAH THE ENDING WAS DIFFERENT.

This fanfic made me feel so naughty. ;)

A nice read.

Hmm... not bad to be honest... I wonder when I'll see a song I actually KNOW being recited. lol.

However, as negatives go, it IS very short, but not too short for me not to like, however. I really would've expected to at least see the word "whip" ONCE during this one, but I guess it's still alright. lol. If only there was a DATE when this all takes place. lol.

Regardless, it's still, though very vague with details, solid enough to rank... 6.75/10. I liked it, but there SHOULD be a more to this... like... a Phoenix/Franziska romance fanfic? I dunno, I think too much. lol.

Hope to see more! Have a Nice Day!

Funny...I actually like this one better than the other, rewritten one. Sure, it's a predictible ending, but it's still funny (in a twisted kind of way). The rewritten one was...confusing. It made so many sharp and unexpected turns that it lost me. So this one was better for me-easy to follow, easy to manage. One question, though...wouldn't Phoenix recognize Franziska from her hair color? In the story, it says that his hand tangled in her hair. So then it was visible, right? I mean, even in the future, that light aqua color would be hard to miss. To me, anywyays. Maybe she dyed it, or maybe Phoenix wasn't focused enough to notice...?

Interesting.

But what happened in the other? You said you added a bunch of stuff, i'm curious.