 pixie paramount 2007-08-04 . chapter 1::drools::
As much as I'm going to try--which is: really, really, REALLY hard--to remain coherent, I will probably fail horribly because, for one, you write amazingly and, secondly, you wrote fairytale!Rue/Mytho which is gold as far as I'm concerned.
And with that out of the way, I shall go squee and blubber in chorently because this is Tutu and it's cute, even when it's evil, and this fanfiction. So I'll squee and blubber for always, apparently.
Anyway, this completely owns me.
But, particularly, this:
[She can’t breathe. Why can’t she breathe?]
AND,
[“Well enough. Is that enough to keep him from eating your heart?” His fingers curl inward and begin tapping against her throat. “But you’re safe enough. Who would want such a shriveled thing?”
“Mytho – ” It’s a choked gasp, collapsing off her tongue.
“I’m sorry, Princess. Did I hurt your feelings? I was only trying to be honest.” The fingers halt, and move away from her throat. “Don’t you want me to be honest? I never thought you were a coward, Kraehe.”
“I’m not – ” But she is. Of course she is. He hasn’t said anything that isn’t true.]
'cause, um, dialogue and sexual innuendo and, um, yeah. It's gold. Complete and utter gold. Seriously, I'm creeped out by Mytho and I pity Rue in this and, yeah. It kinda hurt.
...
Okay, it hurt quite a bit but who cares for the specifics.
This was lovely in an angst-ridden, evil-y way. It's also very pretty. ^_^ Well done.
- Pixie |