I have read it all and I was really suprised by the sudden stop right before the orgastic finale. Is Liz alive? Will Harry die? Is james going to be ok? WE DON'T KNOW!! I really liked it alot.

Great ** story! your exactly like Jim Butcher, are you sure you don't own anything of the Dresden Files

So heh heh what's this metaphor involving ** Stars Rabbits and a Two By For? anyway good story i hope there's a sequel to this one

More, please? I'm really loving this...

one word: Amazing. keep it up.

Oh please... there has to be more... you can't just leave it there... please

I very much hope you continue this, it almost looks like Dresden (Harry) is going to have to build his own territory around Chicago if he is an enemy of the council he is now the enemy of just about every major power we know of. also where are the werewolves, you would think they would have gotten involved in at least some of the things happening in this story, also considering how quickly they grow (in number) through the books you would think there would be a swarm of them by now. I also wonder if Little Chicago could be used in a voodoish way to create wards around Chicago as a whole.
Thanks for writing,
Jay

Perfect.

Wow, this one was intense! More please!!

This is such an excellent story. It's so engaging...I couldn't stop reading. I love Harry's interaction with Lasciel...I've always felt she wasn't quite as evil as the other demons. Can't wait to see what happens next!

So kiss my demon possessed **. Haha priceless

I like the way you're doing a 'significant moments in the life of' compository. It's a really interesting way to move the events along. Have you gotten a copy of White Night yet? Because you're incorperating elements of Lash into your story, and I was curious. Anyway, can't wait for the next chapter!

See you then!
Silver Cateyes

I'm not really partial to the Nick's POV, but I look forward to more, as long as you focus a bit more on Dresden obliterating the Merlin. :D

Jon

P.S You picked a horrid place to end it. :(

delightful... i liked that you explained why he did not simply summon the coin... will be interesting to see how ythe counil deals with a pair of angry Dresdens, a fallen angel, a dog, a vampie, a human, and two wizards...
Jay

Great story! I have an idea for an additional side story. How Harry was caught by the Red Court. You could have Susan Rodriguez change into a Red Court Vampire and lure Harry into a trap.