Ooh, this is extremely well-written. I think that's the best praise I can give you.

You really do have a talent for writing (even if it’s only a short story). Although there is only a hand full of Don Quixote stories in fan fiction, yours so far has been the best one I’ve read. I like the detail you put into the story and the way you’ve written the characters. Don Quixote’s madness is almost heartbreaking but I can’t help but like him. I don’t know if you’ve intended to write another chapter but I have to say that the one you’ve written is excellent in its own way. (Sorry if I sound like a jabbering fool…I’m horrible at reviews)